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Silhouette of Pale Light

___________ The curtain of torn promise Falls in a flood of darkness Forging amid confusion Searching a desolate path The desperate vagabond Stumbles through the cold fortress Lost in the shadows of night ___________________________________

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Line Gauthier

Date: 9/8/2018 6:22:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Rick. Well done.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/28/2016 5:26:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Rick.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/26/2016 10:18:00 PM

i like how you ended this pensive write, rick... sweet congrats for being on the winning chart..huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/26/2016 8:39:00 PM

a sliver of a moment seeing into the life of a homeless man. I love your poetic vision when I see one of your winning poems such as thing one, Rick. BIG congrats in the contest.

Joseph May

Date: 10/26/2016 7:54:00 PM

Congrats on your win Rick

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/26/2016 7:50:00 PM

So bittersweet, as if viewing a sad painting, and feeling the emotions of a lost soul. Well done, Rick!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2016 7:11:00 PM

this one is deep and sad, but so beautifully written, Rick. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Rick Parise
Date: 10/1/2016 7:25:00 PM

OK I see a couple typ-os now. Shucks

Rick Parise
Date: 10/1/2016 7:24:00 PM

Hi Andrea.....Thank U and Thanks for the Tanks comment. Very Nice. Hope all is well with you. I see you a very talented poet.....your on the Top List every time I looked.....Congrats to you !!!!!Love & Light. I'm on my phone and the screen is very smal......tiny......hope there's no typoz