Silhouette

Shifting shadows sculpt ebony edges,
Inking boundaries 'twixt twilight and Dusk.
Light's tethered to shapeshifting silhouettes,
Highlights shadowed, defused differences.
Out of chaos, scattered structures conjoin,
Utilizing rays of a setting sun.
Etched upon the fringes of Night and Day,
The trees begin to merge with the background:
Time pauses, almost standing still, as Dusk
Erases the colors garnered by Day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 9:41 PM
Emile, Imagery is fantastic! As an artist, painter, I like the first line very much. That's how I would start a painting. Sculpt the ebony edges. Congrats on POTD!
Pinet Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 7:21 AM
Thanks, Barbara; I especially appreciate the comments of an artist such as yourself, my friend, Emile.
Kaufman Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 3:08 PM
Belated congratulations on this lovely POTD. I love the imagery and the wonderful alliteration of your words.
Pinet Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 3:30 PM
Thanks, Nancy; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 7:15 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Emile :) - hugs
Pinet Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 10:26 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Mclean  Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 11:01 PM
Really well done; great flow and use of symbolism.
Pinet Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 6:21 AM
Thanks, Caitlyn; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Vaso Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 10:53 PM
Congrats on POTD, well deserved!
Pinet Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 6:21 AM
Thanks, Arthur; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 9:07 PM
Great Acrostic, congratulations on POTD.
Pinet Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 6:20 AM
Thanks, Eve; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Nicole Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 8:15 PM
Such a beautiful acrostic, describing the soft shadows of a silhouette. Congratulations Emile, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
Pinet Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 6:20 AM
Thanks, Brandy; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Downing  Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 7:01 PM
Oh this is very lovely, Emile. BIG congratulations on POTD!
Pinet Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 6:19 AM
Thanks, Akkina; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Fowler Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 5:22 PM
Stunningly beautiful my friend. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
Pinet Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 6:19 AM
Thanks, Linda; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 1:22 PM
Congratulations for POTD Emile :)
Pinet Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 6:18 AM
Thanks, Heidi; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Slaughter Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 11:08 AM
Great imagery and quite lovely overall, Emile. Congrats on POTD, as well.
Pinet Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 6:18 AM
Thanks, Jim; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
McBride  Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 10:04 AM
Congratulations on POTD, : ). Love it
Pinet Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 6:18 AM
Thanks, Stephan; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
M  Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 8:44 AM
Congratulations Emile on POTD! Debx
Pinet Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 6:17 AM
Thanks, Deb; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Edmonds  Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 7:52 AM
A lovely Silhouette Acrostic Emile, I love to see trees on the fringe between night and day against the twilight sky, a delightful sight. Congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day… Belle
Pinet Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 6:17 AM
Thanks, Belle; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Baker Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 6:43 AM
A well-constructed Crostic, Emile. Nice use of contrast and imagery. I especially enjoy the inclusion of alliteration using the letter "s" words on five occasions, in the ten lines. The triple, "fragmented flowing forms" was particularly nice. Congratulations on your POTD! It is certainly well deserved. Have an enjoyable weekend, Bill
Pinet Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 6:45 AM
Thanks, Bill; I appreciate your wonderful comments, my friend, Emile.
Scott Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 4:31 AM
Very beautifully crafted, I just love it "Etched upon the fringes.." how gorgeous :) You are the master and brilliant that you achieved POTD. Well deserved
Pinet Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 6:43 AM
Thanks, Sam; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Gentile Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 4:26 AM
Lovely and beautiful images Emile! A perfect subject for an Acrostic! Congratulations on your POTD honors!!
Pinet Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 6:42 AM
Thanks, Mike; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Goyal Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 3:40 AM
Congratulations on POTD. I enjoyed reading this, "Time pauses, almost standing still, while dusk". was my favorite. -AG
Pinet Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 6:42 AM
Thanks, Arastu; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Kitchin Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 3:20 AM
Emile, back to congratulate you on POTD!
Pinet Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 6:41 AM
Thanks so much, Tania; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 2:16 AM
Dropping back with many congrats on POTD, this really is a delightful poem Emile:-) hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 6:40 AM
Thanks so much, Jan; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Lane Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 2:07 AM
Emile, seeing your poem receive poem of the day made me smile. Congratulations to you and your ‘Silhouette.’
Pinet Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 6:40 AM
Thanks, so much Lin; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Bowring Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 1:22 AM
Many congratulations on POTD Emile with your wonderfully creative, well written acrostic poem. Amazing lines. ‘Light contrasts with fragmented flowing forms’.So clever. Enjoy your celebratory day. You deserve it!
Pinet Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 6:39 AM
Thanks, Christina; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 12:46 AM
Congratulations on the POTD!, Emile. Very well deserved with this Fantastic Acrostic poem. Enjoy the day!
Pinet Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 6:38 AM
Thanks, Maria; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Cunningham Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 12:32 AM
I'm back already to to say congratulations Emile on the honour of POTD. Tom
Pinet Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 6:37 AM
Thanks, Tom; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Cunningham Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 11:57 PM
Love this one Emile, very creative acrostic, Tom
Pinet Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 6:37 AM
Thanks, Tom; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
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