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Shifting Shadows sculpt ebony edges
Inscribing boundaries of light and dark.
Light contrasts with fragmented flowing forms,
Highlighting converging differences.
Out of chaos structure seemingly takes form,
Utilizing rays of a setting sun.
Etched upon the fringes of night and day,
Trees merge with backgrounds of liquid black as
Time pauses, almost standing still, while dusk
Erases Twilight's sullied silhouette.

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Date: 10/1/2023 9:41:00 PM
Emile, Imagery is fantastic! As an artist, painter, I like the first line very much. That's how I would start a painting. Sculpt the ebony edges. Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 10/2/2023 7:21:00 AM
Thanks, Barbara; I especially appreciate the comments of an artist such as yourself, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/16/2023 3:08:00 PM
Belated congratulations on this lovely POTD. I love the imagery and the wonderful alliteration of your words.
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Date: 9/16/2023 3:30:00 PM
Thanks, Nancy; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/16/2023 7:15:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Emile :) - hugs
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Date: 9/16/2023 10:26:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 11:01:00 PM
Really well done; great flow and use of symbolism.
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:21:00 AM
Thanks, Caitlyn; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 10:53:00 PM
Congrats on POTD, well deserved!
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:21:00 AM
Thanks, Arthur; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 9:07:00 PM
Great Acrostic, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:20:00 AM
Thanks, Eve; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 8:15:00 PM
Such a beautiful acrostic, describing the soft shadows of a silhouette. Congratulations Emile, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:20:00 AM
Thanks, Brandy; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 7:01:00 PM
Oh this is very lovely, Emile. BIG congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:19:00 AM
Thanks, Akkina; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 5:22:00 PM
Stunningly beautiful my friend. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:19:00 AM
Thanks, Linda; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 1:22:00 PM
Congratulations for POTD Emile :)
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:18:00 AM
Thanks, Heidi; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 11:08:00 AM
Great imagery and quite lovely overall, Emile. Congrats on POTD, as well.
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:18:00 AM
Thanks, Jim; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, : ). Love it
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:18:00 AM
Thanks, Stephan; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations Emile on POTD! Debx
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:17:00 AM
Thanks, Deb; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 7:52:00 AM
A lovely Silhouette Acrostic Emile, I love to see trees on the fringe between night and day against the twilight sky, a delightful sight. Congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:17:00 AM
Thanks, Belle; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 6:43:00 AM
A well-constructed Crostic, Emile. Nice use of contrast and imagery. I especially enjoy the inclusion of alliteration using the letter "s" words on five occasions, in the ten lines. The triple, "fragmented flowing forms" was particularly nice. Congratulations on your POTD! It is certainly well deserved. Have an enjoyable weekend, Bill
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Date: 9/15/2023 6:45:00 AM
Thanks, Bill; I appreciate your wonderful comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 5:34:00 AM
Nice to see you take your turn in the sun Emile
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Date: 9/15/2023 6:44:00 AM
Thanks, Tom, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 4:31:00 AM
Very beautifully crafted, I just love it "Etched upon the fringes.." how gorgeous :) You are the master and brilliant that you achieved POTD. Well deserved
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Date: 9/15/2023 6:43:00 AM
Thanks, Sam; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 4:26:00 AM
Lovely and beautiful images Emile! A perfect subject for an Acrostic! Congratulations on your POTD honors!!
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Date: 9/15/2023 6:42:00 AM
Thanks, Mike; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 3:40:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. I enjoyed reading this, "Time pauses, almost standing still, while dusk". was my favorite. -AG
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Date: 9/15/2023 6:42:00 AM
Thanks, Arastu; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 3:20:00 AM
Emile, back to congratulate you on POTD!
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Date: 9/15/2023 6:41:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tania; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 2:16:00 AM
Dropping back with many congrats on POTD, this really is a delightful poem Emile:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/15/2023 6:40:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jan; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 2:07:00 AM
Emile, seeing your poem receive poem of the day made me smile. Congratulations to you and your ‘Silhouette.’
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Date: 9/15/2023 6:40:00 AM
Thanks, so much Lin; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 1:22:00 AM
Many congratulations on POTD Emile with your wonderfully creative, well written acrostic poem. Amazing lines. ‘Light contrasts with fragmented flowing forms’.So clever. Enjoy your celebratory day. You deserve it!
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Date: 9/15/2023 6:39:00 AM
Thanks, Christina; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 12:46:00 AM
Congratulations on the POTD!, Emile. Very well deserved with this Fantastic Acrostic poem. Enjoy the day!
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Date: 9/15/2023 6:38:00 AM
Thanks, Maria; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 12:32:00 AM
I'm back already to to say congratulations Emile on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 9/15/2023 6:37:00 AM
Thanks, Tom; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
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