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Silently

With your death this old house mourns as decay smiles Once a life of glamour held her room of pink brocade Now ivy grows through broken hearts of girlhood wiles To smother closet doors as weeping teardrops fade Her chair empty, now torn and forlornly dwells alone Lost memories hide behind desolate shoji screens Softly spoken words silently die as if made of heavy stone Teasing sweet perfume lingers in their muted screams Written 9-3-2019 Free Verse or Rhyme Poetry Contest photo #3 Sponsor: Eve Roper 1st place

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Date: 9/11/2019 3:57:00 PM
I sometimes come back to reread the poems and again enjoy how they make me feel. Thank you again.. Hugs Eve
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/13/2019 7:51:00 PM
xoxox Me too....I like that fav button!
Date: 9/9/2019 5:38:00 PM
super interpretation of the image Jeanne, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/9/2019 6:59:00 PM
Thanks Jan...that one was a real challenge!
Date: 9/9/2019 5:22:00 PM
Congratulations on first place in my contest, Jeanne. Hugs Eve
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/9/2019 6:59:00 PM
Thank you Eve. I love using paintings or photos as inspiration. I loved the cat and boy too.
Date: 9/9/2019 1:07:00 PM
- Your description is wonderful ... and a clear winner ... congratulations, Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/9/2019 7:00:00 PM
Thanks for your read and kind comment. Jeanne
Date: 9/6/2019 4:41:00 AM
I have not seen this writing prompt, and now I feel I have lived in it.
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Date: 9/5/2019 6:26:00 PM
you have penned perfect imagery into this room and gave it a story that made it come to life beautifully....excellent writing my friend :) hugs
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/9/2019 7:06:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words Sandra...it means a lot to have fellow poets enjoy my work.
Date: 9/5/2019 12:09:00 AM
such a solid picture on my mind creating images of melancholia, jeanne.. wow!..huggs
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/9/2019 7:07:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed and stopped by to give encouragement. xoxoJeanne
Date: 9/4/2019 11:18:00 AM
Jeanne, wow you captured the theme perfectly and beautifully written too !
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/4/2019 11:52:00 AM
It so looked like a lovely room all forlorn and sad to me. Thank you for your kind words
Date: 9/4/2019 8:58:00 AM
Love the imagery. I love the entire poem but that 7th line is just a perfect fit. Best wishes for a win in the contest. Charlie
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/4/2019 11:51:00 AM
Thanks Charlie...it was a joy to write.

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