Silent Two

I wish I could keep my big mouth shut Then I could become Silent Two But no, Bobby has to speak as loud as he can So, he could never be as Silent as you I have become a fan of this Silent One As I read this poetry the words so gentle and free Guiding me to figure out how to write my poetry

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Alexis Y.

Date: 12/31/2018 11:49:00 AM

Hi Bobby, You have penned a good dedication to Silent One. I see he likes it as well:-) Alexis

Silent One

Date: 12/31/2018 11:09:00 AM

Nice one Bobby, made me smile.. However, I have not really taught you anything.. You have developed yourself.. Keep writing..

Bobby May
Date: 12/31/2018 3:54:00 PM

You inspire me get use to it lol you my friend have a spacial way that blows me away you have a gift my friend!