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Silent Twilight

As the wind holds its breath and silence slyly waits in the wings, A domical canopy of mist shrouds the forlorn walkway lighten by the solemn glow of a solitary street lamp. There was not a stir, Neither the sigh of a whisper Nor the phantom of a shadow As if the day was held on the cusp of the twilight. An uneasy feeling permeates my being A sense of foreboding sways my thoughts, And a stretch of melancholy landscape looms ahead. From afar, yonder Someone calls my name, it seems I stand and wait holding on to a hope A love I longed for… Alas, never seen! ~08/13/22 ~Contest: A Brian Strand Premiere Choice.

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Date: 8/22/2022 10:11:00 AM
Such a beautiful and sad poem, Abdul. I especially loved the lines~ as if the day was held on the cusp of twilight. Congratulations on your win!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/22/2022 5:54:00 PM
Thanks Ann.
Date: 8/20/2022 7:59:00 AM
What an excellent entry Abdul! I was completely drawn into the mystery of shadows between the light and darkness of twilight time. It is my favorite time of morning and evening. I am happy to see this wonderful poem recognized in Second place. It ties for the trophy in my book! Congratulations my friend. This is going straight into my Faves! Blessings xxoo
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/20/2022 1:24:00 PM
Thanks Connie. I am so glad you liked it. Appreciate much.

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