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silent studies

with a stabilised sky I can watch the world turn where the blurs of the cars and shooting stars collect in my mind smoothing over scars creation of and in orbs of earth and eye and brain inputs unending do not allow for catching up or staying sane a call for stillness let it play out like ballet I want no place to be on the starry night of a well lived day allowed to rest knowing it's deducted from my time it's hard to focus on what may be best as I stagger from chaos to very nearly rhyme order is called for I'm in the 'disapproved of' mire what is order ...if it steals zest and desire no matter my notions and ideas the earth still turns my time runs on self doubt and on one of these rotations it will all have run out.

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Date: 3/30/2024 3:40:00 PM
Loved the flow of this- the end was powerful, as were the thoughts you were trying to portray- wishing you lots of inspiration!!
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Date: 3/30/2024 4:04:00 PM
Thank you Paige x
Date: 3/29/2024 7:31:00 AM
I'm a master of silent studies.. I guess this is from Brian's contest? Its deep and I can see you have carefully written it.. It is a poignant reflection on the human experience, capturing the complexities of emotion, the longing for meaning, and the quest for inner peace amidst the chaos of life's journey.
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Date: 3/29/2024 7:52:00 AM
I graciously thank you for your kindness. I'll try not to run amok shouting about silence but make no promises :)
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Date: 3/29/2024 7:47:00 AM
I hope no one has to study in silence and keep it all in.. suppression is never a good thing, that is why we have poetry.. You may take the title, it is all yours lol...
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Date: 3/29/2024 7:42:00 AM
Haha I should have approached you and got approval on use of your brand :) my Tempest one is currently waiting on a yay or nay from Brian. This was written just after seeing the attached video on Instagram got me thinking. Thank you for spending time with the ideas. I do a lot of silent studies though - but if I don't talk about it then I may be the master? Although there's clearly someone out there who has kept it entirely to themselves who is feeling pretty pleased with themselves - maybe if we play with the titles? Silent One, Silent Student (me - currently too loud), master of silence, silent master, silent maestro, Mr Silent, Monsieur Silentio.... Haha thank you for your comment (clearly I'm just deep and poignant part time :) )

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