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Silent Storms The silent storm is like the depths of sea arisen from a blackened summer sky. Atomic flash with bright intensity the power spark which teases at the eye. Some folks have no need for roaring thunder. They feel its deep vibration in the soul. Heaven’s fireworks display, such a wonder as rains fall and wind slaps the face in scold. Aromas strong outside your garden door as hot ground meets the moisture from the clouds emanating gentle whiffs of petrichor distraction from a clash of air so loud. Silent storms speak in streaks of bright white light, sudden flash of pure brilliance in your sight. 2/19/18 Describe a thunder storm without the sense of sound Sponsored by: Brenda Chiri

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Date: 3/5/2018 4:24:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely entry Sian. Congratulations on your win! : )
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Date: 3/3/2018 10:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.. wonderful imagery made me feel every line...
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Date: 3/3/2018 7:40:00 PM
Using all the senses, except for sound !! Great work !!! Congratulations!!
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Date: 3/3/2018 7:03:00 PM
A lovely Sonnet with wonderful 'soundless' imagery portrayed, Sian. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/3/2018 6:21:00 PM
Well done, Sian. I particularly love your last stanza. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/28/2018 3:24:00 AM
Impressed by the vivid imagery and strong appeal to the senses, Sian. Regards // paul
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