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Silent Shadows On the Snow



Night's silent shadows softly fall
     from moonlight's muted, mellow glow,
that shroud the land with sunless shawls
     on cold ground glazed with glinting snow.

Tree branches, seen with broader breadths
     by shadows that bestow their form,
splayed stark atop the snowy depths;
     by wind, they swirl like snaky swarms.

Small bushes sway between the trees
     to shadow snow like ghastly ghosts
that dance deceptively to tease
     and harrow wary human hosts.

Pure, peaceful pageantry at night;
     such lovely landscapes, to be viewed.
But, sometimes shadows strain our sight-
     with varied visions misconstrued.


March 27, 2018

Premiere Contest: 2022 Poetry Marathon 
                          Mile 6 Poetry Contest

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George Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 9:43 AM
The night pageantry is so alluring. Your highly alliterative poem imparts the splendor, serenity and beauty of the cold moonlit night.... ! A joy to read. ..........Congratulations Sandra !
Haight Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 10:23 AM
Thank you so much, Valsa, for reading my poem, your congratulations, and lovely comments! Much appreciated! Sandra
Radice Avatar
July 9, 2022 at 5:41 AM
Sandra, everything that has been said below. All I can add is that your wonderful rhymes feel so natural and not forced in any way whatsoever. This is pure poetry. Cheers - Gary
Haight Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 10:21 AM
Thank you, Gary, for reading my poem and for your very uplifting comments! Sandra
Watt Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 1:07 PM
Sandra, the human soul doesn't seem to trust the night and so we misconstrue artistic shadows into ghosts and omens. How beautifully you have portrayed these nighttime paintings in your lovely poem, crafted with such stunning imagery, cadence, and alliteration. Congrats on your win ~ John
Haight Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 10:20 AM
Thank you very much, John, for your visit, congrats, and very kind comments! Much appreciated! Sandra
Toney Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 12:41 PM
Sandra, your alliteration is a sweet sensation! Your last two lines are brilliant. And your excellent GIF nicely displays the "Silent Shadows on the Snow." Congratulations on your win on Mile 6 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 7 has already started!
Haight Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 10:20 AM
Thank you so much, Mark, for my nice placement in your Mile 6 Contest, and for your congrats and uplifting comments!
La France Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 9:42 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my L contest with your beautiful poem, excellent writing ~ love and serenity _Constance
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 8:18 PM
Sandra, you should be teaching poetry. This beautiful poem is so impressive that someone without sight could view the scene just as well as someone sighted. You alliteration as well as your imagery is simply stunning in this masterpiece. One of your best and I am putting this gem into my faves! Congratulations on your deserving top win! : ) xxoo
Haight Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 7:53 PM
Wow, Connie...you are so kind with these wonderful uplifting and supportive comments. Thank you so much for your positive thoughts, congrats, and the fave! I always appreciate your visits and encouragement. Hugs, Sandra
Ashley Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 5:10 PM
Returning with congratulations Sandra, for your excellent win with your stunning poem of superb alliteration. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Haight Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 7:53 PM
Thank you, Susan! I am again honored with your very supportive and uplifting comments and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 2:21 AM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful imagery. Enjoyed.
Haight Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 7:53 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. I always appreciate your visits and support! Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 9:50 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:26 PM
Thank you very much, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 3:41 PM
Lovely, Sandra. Congrats on your win.
Haight Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:46 PM
Thank you very much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
George   Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 7:42 AM
Beautiful...simply beautiful. Many congrats.
Haight Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:47 PM
Thank you so much, Elaine, for your visit, congrats, and very uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra
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April 2, 2018 at 7:47 PM
Sandra ... I really LOVED this poem! It just really stood out to me. The image is perfect!! And your use of alliteration with the amazing rhyme makes me love it even more! Congrats on your win! Judy
Haight Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:44 PM
Thank you so very much, Judy, for your congratulations and uplifting, heartfelt comments. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it. Thanks again! Hugs, Sandra :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 8:43 AM
A cool poem along with your visual! Congrats on your haunting write!
Haight Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:43 PM
Thanks, Kim! I appreciate your congrats and very supportive comments. I was pleased to find that visual to match the mood! Hugs, Sandra
Gupta Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 10:04 PM
Beautifully written ... Congratulations on your excellent win ...
Haight Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:42 PM
Thank you so much, Probir! I appreciate your visit, congrats, and positive comments. Sandra
Ashley Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 7:23 PM
Oh how enchanting Sandra. Your imagery is absolutely stunning and your alliteration is simply superb. Beautiful and enthralling poetry. Congratulations on your excellent win! Warmest wishes..
Haight Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:41 PM
Hi, Susan, thank you again for your visit, congratulations, and your lovely, uplifting comments. I appreciate them so much. Hugs, Sandra
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 3:26 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:39 PM
Thank again, Anne-Lise, for your nice visit and, as always, your congratulations and heartfelt comments. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
One Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 2:48 PM
Beautiful imagery Sandra and nice use of alliteration.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
Haight Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:38 PM
Thank you, SO! I enjoyed writing this poem for your contest and I appreciate my nice placement. Thanks again! Sandra :)
Krampe Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 1:09 PM
Your words paint such a beautiful picture, Sandra, I love the imagery.
Haight Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 6:59 PM
Thank you so much, Agnes, for your lovely, supportive comment! Hugs, Sandra
Talbot Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 3:01 AM
Beautiful poetry, a fave! Good luck with the contest... Mick
Haight Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 6:58 PM
Thank you very much, Mick, for your positive comment and the fave! So nice of you! Sandra
Goff Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 10:18 PM
Quite a delightful poem, Sandra! mysterious, captivating, wonderful!
Haight Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 6:57 PM
Thank you so much, James, for your visit and uplifting comments. Much appreciated! Sandra
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