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When life becomes confusing, my only saviour is my simple musing. Susurration of sighs, reflect sands of time, like an unbalanced hourglass. As words lose innocent connotations i drift into my silent reverie. Wild fires no longer rage, rain perishes like a drought who knows what winds may come and go. Motionless mind agrees to a ceasefire, with my apprehensive heart. Cumulonimbus clouds clear, sky is like a fresh page. Simple sun shines - scintillating, illuminating an enchanting rainbow. Horizons reflect like stained glass windows Path clears before me, as I bask in the brisk breeze. Refreshing wise winds soothe. as zephyrs heal tender wounds. I see smoky mountains up ahead, but I believe I can conquer them as pain is no longer my companion.
Simple Musing Silent One 27 February 2019

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Date: 3/31/2019 9:51:00 PM
Beautiful alliteration. Very relatable.
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Date: 3/10/2019 2:23:00 PM
A refreshing and hopeful piece. Love it. Your use of the English language is so superior in this and everything you write. A true poet: You.
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Date: 3/10/2019 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD and well deserved.
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Date: 3/9/2019 10:12:00 AM
Silent, I like you silent reverie, beautifully penned and congratulations on POTD~
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Date: 3/3/2019 8:33:00 PM
Congratulations on having this splendid poem honored with POTD Silent! : )
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Date: 3/2/2019 2:36:00 PM
Reading this while the song is playing in the background has a wonderful, soothing, yet pensive effect. I have always loved this song and now I have a new poem to "Fav". Thank you for this moment in time that I can return to any time.
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Date: 3/2/2019 12:33:00 PM
Wow ! Awesomeness!
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Date: 3/2/2019 8:36:00 AM
Hi Silent, firstly, congratulations on your POTD with this excellent write. The honour is well-deserved, as it always is when it comes to your words. A beautiful write, straight from the heart. You have created excellence through your words, painting such a wonderful canvas. A Fave. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 3/2/2019 7:18:00 AM
WoW! Silent, Thanks for sharing where you go to , to write your amazing poetry! Great title, content and imagery. Congratulations for getting the poem of the day. You deserved the honor for this incredible poem:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/2/2019 5:19:00 AM
How nice to leave the world behind and enter into such a creative place as your mind Silent. Then to still your beating heart.
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Date: 3/1/2019 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations on been been honored with POTD Silent One, Best wishes, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/1/2019 9:04:00 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD award. // paul
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Date: 3/1/2019 12:49:00 AM
Back with big congratulations
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Date: 2/28/2019 7:00:00 PM
I really like your images in this one, Silent One. Peter, paul and Mary. My mom was telling me just the other day she was watching a concert of theirs on tv, but i think Mary is now gone.
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Date: 2/28/2019 3:47:00 PM
This is truly excellent! I love the line, 'as pain is no longer my companion'. (I guess, because, all too often, it is...)Congratulations!
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Date: 2/28/2019 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations on this very inspiring creation receiving POTD honors! Belief and faith in positive results can and does work miracles.
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Date: 2/28/2019 1:13:00 PM
Congrats on POTD S.O. Tom.
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Date: 2/28/2019 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 2/28/2019 12:30:00 PM
WoW! Simply wonderful piece. There is an aura of peace that surrounds as I read the words here. Love it. Congrats on a well deserved POTD. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/28/2019 11:53:00 AM
Congrats!!! my Silent friend...on your POTD!!...excellent write...love & light...^WW^...{*J*}
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Date: 2/28/2019 11:06:00 AM
Courageous poem with examples of boldness... I love these lines." I see smoky mountains up ahead, but I believe I can conquer them as pain is no longer my companion " Congratulations Silent One...
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Date: 2/28/2019 11:00:00 AM
Your great musing is a balm.. poetry of a great significance.. reveries into the world of words.. wounds sealed.. pain healed.. a beauty revealed! Amazing poem deserving the honour and praise.. Congratulations, Silent One, on your POTD! Always a great delight to see your gems recognised and highly appreciated. My deepest regards and Blessings.
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Date: 2/28/2019 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations!!!!
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Date: 2/28/2019 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD with this amazing piece of clever alliteration and rich meaning. Another favorite to add to my list :)
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Date: 2/28/2019 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations SO...A musing gem indeed...it would be interesting when pain is out of the equation...
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