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We strolled along deserted lanes lined by straggly rubble walls, adorned by yellow cowslips, perfumed with early wild narcissus, and music, a fine harmony, performed by finches of all colours Whilst blue **** and sparrow fly from tree to tree. I lingered there, hoping I could get away from the fathomless worries of the weary world, or perhaps find rest in an eternal quietude. We walked hand in hand, listening to the rill Its clear waters zigzagging downwards. She stared at the rivulet with wonderment. I admired her composure, her interest In all around her, a stoic tranquillity. I invited her to sit besides me on a wooden bench. Enjoy the vast silent panorama of the countryside. No other human could be seen in the vicinity Except far off, a farmer tilled his field. She put her head against my shoulder. We uttered not one word. It was pure bliss. I realized love can be silent, For utter silence is true love.

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Date: 6/12/2022 3:14:00 AM
Simply brilliant, Victor:)
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Date: 6/11/2022 2:11:00 PM
A "Lovely" write and picture. Love your ending. Have a great/blessed day..................
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Date: 6/10/2022 5:09:00 AM
Togetherness through beautiful lands, solitude, peacefulness, never alone. Beautiful imagery! A romantic heart!
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Date: 6/10/2022 4:10:00 AM
i agree with you Victor silence, being together and not saying a word but just holding hands means the world. Absolute and complete contentment, why some say to be content is boring is beyond me - content is found in silent moments of love, beautiful poem my friend. love, hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/9/2022 6:50:00 PM
Love this Victor a special moment of love, peace, and tranquility. I can relate to this awseome write. God bless you and hope you are well my friend...
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Date: 6/9/2022 6:23:00 PM
I love the utter stillness, tranquility and beauty evoked in these breathtaking lines, especially the last verse. Great writing, Victor. :)
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Date: 6/9/2022 3:06:00 AM
- Love does not need words ... a beautiful poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2022 3:41:00 PM
a resplendent exuberance, bringing vibrance and meaning to life. Sentimental like early nineteen century romantics. In awe! Anaya
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Date: 6/8/2022 9:18:00 AM
when two people are in love, you don't need words, just eyes and knowing Victor, beautiful poem, thank you for sharing your heart and soul in your poetry, :)
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Date: 6/8/2022 8:16:00 AM
I love this Victor! So beautiful. I loved journeying with you through silence, love and bliss. You painted such an inviting scene. You are a gifted writer my friend. So happy to have found you here ! Blessings my friend, Susan :)
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Date: 6/8/2022 7:48:00 AM
Beautiful and so romantic my friend. Love does make a difference. Blessings my friend
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Date: 6/8/2022 6:47:00 AM
This is a beautifully written and expertly crafted poem, Victor. Love blooms at the sight of passion. Something that is garnished with exquisite descriptions of the moments and evokes visual imagery for the reader.
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Date: 6/8/2022 5:22:00 AM
Wonderful details of the scenes bring forth the images for the reader. Love blossoms in the company of romance. Excellent as always, Victor.
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Date: 6/8/2022 4:19:00 AM
The Bard of romance and love has once more moved his quill to create a symphony of love in serene solitude, affirming that love is silent when intense ! Beautiful, Victor....
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Date: 6/8/2022 3:42:00 AM
Beautiful beautiful beautiful Victor! Always Debx
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Date: 6/8/2022 3:16:00 AM
I agree. When two people love each other they can just sit and enjoy each other without being wordy, but there are times couples need to talk. I appreciate the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 6/8/2022 2:15:00 AM
Finding bliss amid nature's serenity, Wonderful write Victor
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Date: 6/8/2022 1:48:00 AM
You took us on a nostalgic journey...nicely done...Delice
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Date: 6/8/2022 1:21:00 AM
Love your journey i was with you the whole way, been there myself and it is still inside of me..
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Date: 6/8/2022 12:41:00 AM
So true Victor, sometimes words are not needed. Tom
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Date: 6/7/2022 10:32:00 PM
Resurrection of Victor the romantic!
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