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Written on January 7, 2024

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In the wind, I hear her laugh, A nervous giggle – so sweet and wild. On the night, skies soft and bright, Quivering with stars, lit by a spark from God. In the leaves, I hear her and remember… Just yesterday, she was alive and so gentle, Filled with her dreams – promises and belief, Never questioning the peace that comes to those… Who simply see past the sun’s joyous kiss, The sun who sets with a bliss… Secreted beneath the sapphire twinkle, starlight, Reflecting the music of a soul, a life cut short… By the passing of a thought, the fugitive is love, Love spoken into the night by a never setting sun, Sun so true and bright, sun coughing up the words… Grief that will never quit. This is the ceaseless grief, falling through the seas, Broken by those who see past the settling of a teardrop, Against the melancholic backdrop of yesterday, Where there were those who could never believe… There in the setting sun was an everlasting memory, In tones of grace and love, shining so the world can see… Forever, in the wind… I hear her laugh and remember when – She was not just the overcast, the shadow, Fading gracefully beneath a never setting sun A sun intent on growing grief.

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Date: 3/3/2024 11:32:00 AM
Regina, thanks so much for your lovely rendition of this melody!
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Date: 1/9/2024 2:59:00 AM
A poem reminding us that life is so fleeting. "Just yesterday, she was alive and so gentle, Filled with her dreams – promises and belief, Never questioning the peace that comes to those…".... ! A tender flower was cut off. We have no right to question the will of God. May she be included in the legion of angels ! A poem beautiful and equally poignant !
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Date: 1/8/2024 1:45:00 AM
What a lovely poem even if sad. I feel too old but who wants to die? Alas it is our destiny.
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Date: 1/7/2024 4:07:00 PM
a light but poignant tribute to one you lost and the grief you experienced. The last verse all but brought me to tears. Nicely done, Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:21:00 AM
Another awesome poem.. I dont know how you find the time to write so many poems and ones in such a long length in a high grad manner..
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Date: 1/7/2024 2:19:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to the one who you’ve lost Gina, her memory will live on… Belle
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