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Silent Killer

depression starts inconspicuously slowly creeping into thoughts, actions, words gradually poisoning with suicidal thoughts it happens over time spiders creep in entangling the butterflies in your stomach in a web of despair because depression doesn’t have the courtesy to ring the doorbell it creeps through the back entrance of your soul, its dark aura absorbing the light if depression weren’t so surreptitious, less would fall victims to it because depression is the silent killer he is the one who keeps us silent it is he that forces out the ‘fine’ when someone asks how we are it is he that keeps himself concealed so others don’t think we’re insane it is he that tears us apart from the inside and keeps us within his grasp -e.g.

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Date: 8/9/2016 12:41:00 AM
Good...one...Emily , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 8/7/2016 3:30:00 AM
wow. Dark and horrible. I have had to battle this dilemma of depression myself. Well written, and if you want to talk about it, I'd welcome dialogue.
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Date: 8/7/2016 12:30:00 AM
Thanks for the bio, Emily, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/6/2016 10:00:00 PM
I'm enjoying your work...you have a powerful pen!!
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