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Silent Guises

How blissful natures pause reigns the vibratory hum greedily gleaned Cicadas buzz call transport the soft rustle of maples branches sport The three-part tune “whip poor will” The acorns rattle on the window sill All of natures silent prizes Bring joy and wonder in silent guises.

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Cecil Hickman

Date: 8/28/2009 6:03:00 PM

a marvelously written couplet with wonderful and amazing rhymes that lets the readers see and hear the scene that flows outward,,this is truly beautiful,,,Blessings Cecil, and Thank you for taking the time to stop by my words.

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 8/27/2009 7:44:00 AM

A great one , this is!

Diane Christian

Date: 8/27/2009 5:46:00 AM

a great poem, I sent you soup mail, God bless from diane

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/27/2009 12:23:00 AM

Hi Deborah. I love it! (Soup mail) Lovingly, DAS-J

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/26/2009 7:43:00 PM

Oh, my...Cicadas and whip-poor-wills put in gracefol words. Reminds of my youth. Thanks for thoughtful comments on "DUI". No more mystery here...Son killed by a DUI in '01, just trying to get home from work. Went through the whole court thing with MADD by our side. Got to speak our peace at the sentencing...watch them put on the handcuffs and lead him away...so enough with my rambling! Your new friend, Tim

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/26/2009 6:27:00 PM

everybodyy's on a nature trip. jhl

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/26/2009 1:30:00 PM

Love it..it flows so smoothly . BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/26/2009 5:18:00 AM

I am so happy to be able to read your amazing poetry today Deborah. I thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/26/2009 4:26:00 AM

I like it how you feel and mirror nature. Good writing indeed, Deborah and thak you for your comment. Gert

Abe Lopez

Date: 8/25/2009 7:18:00 PM

nature is beautiful we should all stop and listen a little more!!!!very nice

Mehak Kawatra

Date: 8/25/2009 6:25:00 PM

sorry i meant *this is an amazing poem !*...it truly is serene and calm, and i love the way you've used your words =) ...Mehak.

Mehak Kawatra

Date: 8/25/2009 6:17:00 PM

Nice. lol, you commented on a cupl of poems, ...A want, and Superbia. Both of which were written in a generic manner, not with me in mind. And if you look up superbia in the dictinry, ull know that the poem is in context. A want, was written about human nature and what a human mind lusts. Rim, in Superbia, (in context) means ...limit. The poems were not meant for me, and in no way was it to show that i am greedy (for cookies..funi ?), or that i am over-confident. and btw, this is an amazn poem ?

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/25/2009 6:04:00 PM

natures tunes, poetically presented! nice!

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/25/2009 4:39:00 PM

I would love to see all this that surrounds that tranquil setting of your Connecticut home!! It must be the most beautiful sight in autumn colors...(send a fall photo sometime?)....:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/25/2009 1:20:00 PM

Nice fall Couplet. Reminds me that it is almost here. Keep writing. Sara