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Silent Footfalls Shift

Blush cheeks capture a heated day sun-soaked lemon chills melt fast beating hearts drifting off into the bay as the west winds caress sails of love Slow waves tumble toward the shore intertwined fingers grasp and hold tight as fragile souls sing lullabies of peace Ominous clouds threaten a golden sky shading out a final setting orb of hope thunder rolls and soothes the meadowlark undercover I can still hear her sweet call silent footfalls shift after a drenching rain here I'm left standing all alone again

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Date: 7/26/2017 1:45:00 AM
Sometimes we are alone in a crows...sometimes we are alone even in the presence of one we love. You captured this well, Tim. Great write.
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Date: 7/25/2017 8:05:00 PM
The Sparrow flies in the winds of your sails of love! Outstanding, my friend!
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Date: 7/25/2017 7:02:00 PM
Not the one if she walked away from such a romantic interlude. Seriously... lovely words, Tim.
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Date: 7/25/2017 6:44:00 PM
such an emotional write Tim the ending brought a lump to my throat:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/25/2017 5:22:00 PM
I hate high hopes for you this time old buddy. You're just going to have to learn to hold on tighter. Seriously, this is really pretty. You are very talented with imagery. - Dean
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Date: 7/25/2017 4:00:00 PM
Oh Tim this is so good .... Seren
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Date: 7/25/2017 3:50:00 PM
Beautiful again Tim. Landing the reader with the full feeling of loss and loneliness. Well written :)
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