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Silent Dawn



Pond water like glass

quiet envelops the dawn

a moment with Him

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2010 6:37:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your 1st Place win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Silence Is Golden". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2010 9:46:00 PM

congratulations, Barbara, this is aswesome.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/6/2010 9:14:00 AM

Caongrats, Barb. Beautiful write. xxxRalph

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/6/2010 7:36:00 AM

gorgeous, congrats on your win with this beautiful entry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/6/2010 7:06:00 AM

Hi dear, your Soup Mail didn't come through. Love, Carolyn

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 8/5/2010 9:20:00 PM

My Dearest Barbara, A Superb Faith POEM well Deserving the First Place Honors Congratulations My LOVE ALWAYS...HG

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/5/2010 4:51:00 PM

A well deserved win, Barabara. Congrats

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/5/2010 3:22:00 PM

crystal clear and beautiful, Barbara. congratulations

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/5/2010 2:45:00 PM

So beautiful Barbara.....I feel the beauty of the moment! Congratulations.................1st place win...Hooray and well deserved!! Carrie

Timothy Brumley

Date: 8/5/2010 1:41:00 PM

Congrats on your big win with this wonderful message Barbara.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/5/2010 12:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win Barbara. You last line says it all! Beautiful!

James Fraser

Date: 8/5/2010 11:46:00 AM

Many congratulations Barbara with this fine Haiku in Rick's contest, way to go >> James,xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/5/2010 11:26:00 AM

Congrats Barb on your first place win in Rick's contest with your elegant words of Haiku...enjoy your top spot for a top notch write.. with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2010 5:19:00 PM

This is beautiful, Barbara. Luv, Andrea

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/4/2010 1:42:00 PM

Very beautiful Thank you for your comments on "Hannah", Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/3/2010 7:11:00 PM

A nice haiku for the contest. Good luck

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/3/2010 3:55:00 PM

Oh, I can see this one so clearly in your words, Barbara. Wonderful haiku! Have missed you a lot. I'm back in Florida today. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 8/3/2010 6:20:00 AM

Peaceful and serene Barbara >> James,x