Silent But Deadly

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Whilst pushing a full shopping cart Bart expelled a foul silent fart When he stood at the till The cashier looked quite ill His silent ones are off the chart! 12-07-17

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Mark Peterson

Date: 12/22/2017 12:46:00 AM

I guess it's true though hard to tell, for pixels make so little smell.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/22/2017 4:22:00 AM

lol thanks mark:-) hugs jan xx

Roy Pett

Date: 12/11/2017 1:24:00 PM

Brilliant Jan, a cheek squeak can be bad but silent ones are lethal, thanks for giving me a good laugh. :)))

Jan Allison
Date: 12/11/2017 1:33:00 PM

lol @cheek squeak that is hilarious but those silent ones really can be lethal lol:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/9/2017 7:26:00 PM

LOL so funny

Jan Allison
Date: 12/10/2017 8:26:00 AM

I changed Art to Bart I would hate to cause offence:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/8/2017 1:05:00 PM

Maybe one day I can write Limericks as easily as you do Jan. You do so well. So funny. Gosh, this is awful to get caught up in! lol :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/8/2017 1:25:00 PM

I find I can usually write the basic idea or the whole poem in 2 or 3 minutes I just love the form and the humour and I love writing in rhyme :-) hugs Jan xx