silence is my siren

IE, amazing how much is lost and gone forever. The sea does seem relentless in its constant ebb and flow. There was a line from "Jaws"...we need a bigger boat. Nothing will last forever as we know. I hope you are enjoying every sweet day you have. Smiles!

Could you remain in love with just one piece of heart evidence Poetess...J.A.B.

Ahh, my sweet ink impress! This poem makes my mermaid heart glow and beam with pure delight!! How absolutely magical is your wordsmithery here whilst layered with so many impactful emotions that can tug at anyone's heartstrings ~ from the imagery to adjectives and metaphors and especially that title "silence is my siren,, wowww!! Everything is just flawless here in every manner!"I listen to the crashing crystals within sun-drenched sapphires married to the memories of once upon a castaway prose" and "silence is my siren luring mermaid moon-flowers to an island of spiritual embers" I love these lines beyond words could describe! And those glimmering alliterations which you've so artistically woven throughout, ahh, just enchant my soul! "amidst stranded souvenirs sighing and weeping vulnerable verses forever yours, never mine..." That ending part is just so evocative!

Ink, loved the wonderful alliteration… for silence is my siren luring mermaid moon-flowers to an island of spiritual embers…Congrats!

Dearest Ink. You have penned an outstanding poem here! Like a melody that ripples alone can recall, the way you weave together the sadness of the ocean with the memories of affection that was gone generates an otherworldly atmosphere. Like poetry embraced by the ocean, the prose is fragile yet strong. Great bards like Rumi and Abounawas demonstrate that ideas can and do cross-pollinate, which is something I admire about your last comments. So that you know, I don't remember ever reading your poem. However, I would be very delighted to mimic your amazing style, even though our approaches are different, to foster the fertilization of ideas. Your style is really captivating, and I really envy your extensive vocabulary and eloquence. Congratulations on your contest win. May you be blessed!

Hello IE, this is so beautiful and very touching. Sending Blessings your way my friend.

Funny how you can live near a lake and not get what the ocean gives. This is what I think of reading this.

the sea serenades sorrowful symphonies of marine ruins… listen to the crashing crystals… sun-drenched sapphires married to the memories of once upon a castaway prose.. wow these lines papi..the flow the architecture the grace !!!! Alll in a gorgeous harmony!!! Oh and that ending though!!! lost in mythical sagas amidst stranded souvenirs sighing and weeping vulnerable verses forever yours, never mine... mmmmmm the absolute heaviness is heavenly !!! Stunning papi!!!

Ahh!! The sea's silence can truly be a siren for danger. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

When we love from deep within our heart, we give up a piece of it which can never belong to us again. A well chosen title, Ink.

Dearest Inky.This is absolutely enchanting! The way you weave the ocean’s melancholy with the echoes of lost love feels so ethereal, like a song only the waves remember. That last line—forever yours, never mine—hits like a whisper from the deep, lingering long after the tide pulls away. It’s delicate yet powerful, like poetry caught in the arms of the sea. Just beautiful!...Hugs

Awww forever yours forever mine