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Silence

the sound of oxygen pumping, the thread that holds the dying . . . _________________________ August 17, 2012 Poetry/Couplet/silence Copyright Protected, ID 08-414-165-17 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Silence Theme sponsor, Black Eyed Susan ,NA, Judged 08/2012

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Date: 8/29/2012 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Constance. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2012 3:18:00 AM
WHoa! ...stunned silence. Congrats Constance, you've done it very well.
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Date: 8/26/2012 5:24:00 PM
Sad..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/26/2012 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Constance xx
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Date: 8/25/2012 8:33:00 PM
CL;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD
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Date: 8/25/2012 8:23:00 PM
Well done, Constance. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/25/2012 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 8/25/2012 1:17:00 PM
This one is stunning, Constance. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/17/2012 11:07:00 AM
What an amazing write this one is Constance! I am impressed with the power that this poem imposes upon me my friend! I love this incredible piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/17/2012 10:48:00 AM
a sure winner this if entered, written from experience? so scary, yet so powerful, it almost jumps from the page
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Date: 8/17/2012 9:37:00 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading so many diverse poems this morning Constance. I am very happy to have been able to read yours. Thank you for sharing your well written poetry always. Have a very beautiful and joyful weekend. Love, Carol
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