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Tumultuous clouds and bright sunshine spread across the sky Storms may seem everlasting and light may refuse to fade Problems and solutions need balance... focus on the light
May 27, 2018 May 31, 2018 Sijo Contest by Heidi Sands Honorable Mention

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Date: 6/15/2018 7:39:00 PM
WAy to go in the contest, Heidi!! Congratulations.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/15/2018 8:10:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 6/14/2018 4:10:00 AM
Congrats on your win Susan
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/14/2018 2:18:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 6/13/2018 3:33:00 PM
Lovely inspirational message in your poem. Congrats on your win!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/13/2018 5:25:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/3/2018 10:08:00 AM
Love this inspirational sijo! Congratulations on your win! Hugs. Pandita
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/3/2018 11:36:00 PM
Thanks so much! :)
Date: 6/2/2018 10:36:00 PM
Lovely message. Congrats on your win, Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/3/2018 11:36:00 PM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 6/2/2018 10:19:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Susan! Janice
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/3/2018 11:35:00 PM
Thanks, Janice. :)
Date: 6/2/2018 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Susan with your beautifully written Sijo. :))
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/2/2018 7:13:00 PM
Thanks, Roy!
Date: 6/1/2018 6:37:00 AM
- Congratulations on your Sijo poem, Susan :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/2/2018 12:50:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! You too, :)
Date: 6/1/2018 6:12:00 AM
Congrats Susan on your win..a well written poem.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/2/2018 12:49:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay!
Date: 6/1/2018 12:08:00 AM
Inspiring, bright, well written poem Susan. Congratulations for your win! Thank you for entering my contest :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/2/2018 12:49:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi! I am honored to have been on your list. Thank you for sponsoring this contest and for all you do. It was fun.
Date: 5/31/2018 2:08:00 PM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Enjoyed reading your encouraging work. Sara
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/2/2018 12:47:00 AM
Thanks Sara!
Date: 5/28/2018 5:08:00 PM
and well-balanced like your neat sijo!!!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/28/2018 5:44:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 5/28/2018 3:01:00 PM
Very profound Sijo, Susan. Elaine
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/28/2018 5:44:00 PM
Thank you, Elaine.
Date: 5/28/2018 8:15:00 AM
So true.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/28/2018 11:19:00 AM
Hi Richard! How are you? Thanks for commenting.
Date: 5/27/2018 6:06:00 PM
well done, Susan, luck in the contest. hugs eve
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Date: 5/27/2018 5:09:00 PM
Indeed! Life is a lot simpler when one has an open mind. Well done, Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/27/2018 5:45:00 PM
Thank you, my dear.
Date: 5/27/2018 2:31:00 PM
- I agree with your last line, Susan - Great written - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/27/2018 5:45:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 5/27/2018 2:05:00 PM
Nice :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/27/2018 5:44:00 PM
Thanks.

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