Susan Gentry Poet Sijo

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Focus On Light

Tumultuous clouds and bright sunshine
     spread across the sky

Storms may seem everlasting
     and light may refuse to fade

Problems and solutions need
      balance... focus on the light

May 27, 2018


May 31, 2018
Sijo Contest by Heidi Sands
Honorable Mention

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Andrea Dietrich June 15, 2018 at 7:39 PM WAy to go in the contest, Heidi!! Congratulations. Susan Gentry June 15, 2018 at 8:10 PM Thank you, Andrea.

Joseph May June 14, 2018 at 4:10 AM Congrats on your win Susan Susan Gentry June 14, 2018 at 2:18 PM Thank you, Joseph!

Agnes Krampe June 13, 2018 at 3:33 PM Lovely inspirational message in your poem. Congrats on your win! Susan Gentry June 13, 2018 at 5:25 PM Thank you!

Pandita Sietesantos June 3, 2018 at 10:08 AM Love this inspirational sijo! Congratulations on your win! Hugs. Pandita Susan Gentry June 3, 2018 at 11:36 PM Thanks so much! :)

Line Gauthier June 2, 2018 at 10:36 PM Lovely message. Congrats on your win, Susan. Susan Gentry June 3, 2018 at 11:36 PM Thank you, Line.

Janice Canerdy June 2, 2018 at 10:19 PM CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Susan! Janice Susan Gentry June 3, 2018 at 11:35 PM Thanks, Janice. :)

Roy Pett June 2, 2018 at 1:55 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win Susan with your beautifully written Sijo. :)) Susan Gentry June 2, 2018 at 7:13 PM Thanks, Roy!

Anne-Lise Andresen June 1, 2018 at 6:37 AM - Congratulations on your Sijo poem, Susan :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :) Susan Gentry June 2, 2018 at 12:50 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise! You too, :)

Vijay Pandit June 1, 2018 at 6:12 AM Congrats Susan on your win..a well written poem. Susan Gentry June 2, 2018 at 12:49 AM Thanks so much, Vijay!

Heidi Sands June 1, 2018 at 12:08 AM Inspiring, bright, well written poem Susan. Congratulations for your win! Thank you for entering my contest :) Susan Gentry June 2, 2018 at 12:49 AM Thank you, Heidi! I am honored to have been on your list. Thank you for sponsoring this contest and for all you do. It was fun.

Sara Kendrick May 31, 2018 at 2:08 PM Reads like a good contender for the contest. Enjoyed reading your encouraging work. Sara Susan Gentry June 2, 2018 at 12:47 AM Thanks Sara!

Andrea Dietrich May 28, 2018 at 5:08 PM and well-balanced like your neat sijo!!! Susan Gentry May 28, 2018 at 5:44 PM Thanks, Andrea.

Elaine George May 28, 2018 at 3:01 PM Very profound Sijo, Susan. Elaine Susan Gentry May 28, 2018 at 5:44 PM Thank you, Elaine.

Richard Lamoureux May 28, 2018 at 8:15 AM So true. Susan Gentry May 28, 2018 at 11:19 AM Hi Richard! How are you? Thanks for commenting.

Eve Roper May 27, 2018 at 6:06 PM well done, Susan, luck in the contest. hugs eve

Daniel Turner May 27, 2018 at 5:09 PM Indeed! Life is a lot simpler when one has an open mind. Well done, Susan. Susan Gentry May 27, 2018 at 5:45 PM Thank you, my dear.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 27, 2018 at 2:31 PM - I agree with your last line, Susan - Great written - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Susan Gentry May 27, 2018 at 5:45 PM Thank you! :)

Yazmin Malik May 27, 2018 at 2:05 PM Nice :) Susan Gentry May 27, 2018 at 5:44 PM Thanks.