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Sight Unseen

I desired you from the very first moment sight unseen When I took a virgin gaze at your penned words, a jolt of emotional electricity began to course thru my body I felt your passion, I felt your strength I was moved by your indomitable will, not to give in to the struggles within I desired you from the very first moment sight unseen In my mind, I saw a thousand faces of victory, I saw a million stars bursting with sunshine Hope was the star fuel that you gave me --- you gave it to me good, gave it abundantly Now in my dreams, I'm smiling at your lovely unseen face, such a glow of love on it as you sleep Hearts need to roam free in wide open space, and at the edge of your dream, take a leap

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/10/2017 2:08:00 AM
WoW! Freddie, This is so beautiful, romantic and poetic. I enjoy your romantic writes because they take the reader on a sensual and passionate journey. You cause "us" to feel in that moment what you wrote about. I must say I enjoyed the ride. A without doubt seven and fav:) Alexis
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Date: 3/9/2017 5:07:00 PM
This is the material that poetry is made of, soft and warm and beautiful, you wear it well. Wonderful pen Freddie xomo
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Date: 3/9/2017 2:22:00 PM
This is so nice Freddie, wow a thousand faces of victory - great line :)
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Date: 3/9/2017 2:17:00 PM
How beautiful this is..It is how poets 'words make us feel at times indeed...Always needing to read more of what tbey give to us..Awesome.
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Date: 3/9/2017 2:16:00 PM
Beautiful!!!
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