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Have you ever really heard The sweet twitter of the night bird, Flying towards the refuge trees: It's like the sighing of a breeze. Two lovers sit on make shift bench, Strangely they spoke in makeshift French, Hoping their sweet whispers would please: It's like the sighing of a breeze. A boy and a girl ate their meal, Time for play, oh just hear them squeal The children run and laugh and tease: It's like the sighing of a breeze. The parents discuss the future Their love, growth, success and nature Their love mature, their hands they squeeze: It's like the sighing of a breeze. God sees all of His creation, The beauty of their vocation Like the greenery of the trees: It's like the sighing of a breeze.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 11/15/2021 3:28:00 AM
Congratulations Victor on your poem winning the title POTD. Reading this I feel the breeze all around me, tousling my hair !
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Date: 11/3/2021 3:35:00 PM
Yes, exactly! Very well done and congrat's on your POTD.
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Date: 10/28/2021 12:28:00 PM
- Woow ... I understand why this was p.o.t.d. .... wonderful to read, my friend ... congratulations so much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/27/2021 4:42:00 PM
Victor, As always, you express with perfect imagery the beauty and grace that only God can create. Breathtaking! Congratulations on your POTD! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 10/27/2021 1:23:00 PM
Such a delightful masterpiece of nature, Congratulations on your well deserved POTD, Victor.
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Date: 10/27/2021 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations Victor. A pleasure to read my friend...
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Date: 10/27/2021 8:46:00 AM
Your poem is so lovely Victor. Congratulations on having it honored for POTD! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 10/27/2021 1:35:00 AM
Congratulations on penning a great potd!
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Date: 10/26/2021 7:23:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS, Victor, on your P.O.T.D.
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Date: 10/26/2021 4:54:00 PM
Congratulations, Victor, on POTD,
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Date: 10/26/2021 3:37:00 PM
Victor, a huge CONGRATS on your honor. This s a lovely, expressive kyrielle. Janice
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Date: 10/26/2021 2:10:00 PM
Victor, such a delightful vignette of nature, romance, and family love. I love the recurring 4th line of each stanza. Congratulations for the acknowledgement of POTD.
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Date: 10/26/2021 1:50:00 PM
Congratulation! Lovely, and well written~ Debbie
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Date: 10/26/2021 1:43:00 PM
I'm so entranced. CONGRATS
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Date: 10/26/2021 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations dear Victor on your charming write being highlighted today.
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Date: 10/26/2021 10:02:00 AM
Another beautiful poem Victor and POTD too, sending congratulations my friend, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 10/26/2021 9:59:00 AM
The wind can inspire and uplift, in so many amazing ways. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 10/26/2021 9:48:00 AM
Victor, lovely poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 10/26/2021 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations Victor on your POTD honors for your wonderful poem !!
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Date: 10/26/2021 9:03:00 AM
Dear Victor, your poem is as inspiring as it is beautiful! Congratulations for your exquisite poem's honor with POTD! A worthy and well-deserved choice. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/26/2021 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A beautiful couplet. I love your line. "God sees all of His creation,." And He Does. Have A blessed Autumn day..............
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Date: 10/26/2021 8:25:00 AM
How beautiful, Victor! Sighing…
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Date: 10/26/2021 8:02:00 AM
Each time I comment it goes to another poets comment page sorry. But enjoyed this write and congrats for the third time Victor!
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Date: 10/26/2021 7:34:00 AM
Lovely turn of phrase, 'Sighing of a breeze' and such meaningful analogies thereto. Congrats on a richly deserved POTD, Victor. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 10/26/2021 7:31:00 AM
Wow! great poem, love the comparison and the repeating line:) congrats on POTD too:)
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