Notes About The Poem

Sighing of the Breeze

Have you ever really heard
The sweet twitter of the night bird,
Flying towards the refuge trees:
It's like the sighing of a breeze.

Two lovers sit on make shift bench,
Strangely they spoke in makeshift French,
Hoping their sweet whispers would please:
It's like the sighing of a breeze.

A boy and a girl ate their meal,
Time for play, oh just hear them squeal
The children run and laugh and tease:
It's like the sighing of a breeze.

The parents discuss the future
Their love, growth, success and nature
Their love mature, their hands they squeeze:
It's like the sighing of a breeze.

God sees all of His creation,
The beauty of their vocation
Like the greenery of the trees:
It's like the sighing of a breeze.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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George Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 3:28 AM
Congratulations Victor on your poem winning the title POTD. Reading this I feel the breeze all around me, tousling my hair !
Kiser Avatar
November 3, 2021 at 3:35 PM
Yes, exactly! Very well done and congrat's on your POTD.
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 12:28 PM
- Woow ... I understand why this was p.o.t.d. .... wonderful to read, my friend ... congratulations so much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Calasibetta Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 4:42 PM
Victor, As always, you express with perfect imagery the beauty and grace that only God can create. Breathtaking! Congratulations on your POTD! Blessings, Paulette
Poet Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 1:23 PM
Such a delightful masterpiece of nature, Congratulations on your well deserved POTD, Victor.
Tor Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Congratulations Victor. A pleasure to read my friend...
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Your poem is so lovely Victor. Congratulations on having it honored for POTD! Blessings xxoo
Jones Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 1:35 AM
Congratulations on penning a great potd!
Hankins Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 7:23 PM
CONGRATULATIONS, Victor, on your P.O.T.D.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 4:54 PM
Congratulations, Victor, on POTD,
Canerdy Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 3:37 PM
Victor, a huge CONGRATS on your honor. This s a lovely, expressive kyrielle. Janice
Watt Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 2:10 PM
Victor, such a delightful vignette of nature, romance, and family love. I love the recurring 4th line of each stanza. Congratulations for the acknowledgement of POTD.
Brown Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 1:50 PM
Congratulation! Lovely, and well written~ Debbie
Hammett Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 1:43 PM
I'm so entranced. CONGRATS
Logan Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 12:35 PM
Congratulations dear Victor on your charming write being highlighted today.
Gilmour Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 10:02 AM
Another beautiful poem Victor and POTD too, sending congratulations my friend, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Nicole Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 9:59 AM
The wind can inspire and uplift, in so many amazing ways. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
La France Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Victor, lovely poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Gentile Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations Victor on your POTD honors for your wonderful poem !!
Ashley Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 9:03 AM
Dear Victor, your poem is as inspiring as it is beautiful! Congratulations for your exquisite poem's honor with POTD! A worthy and well-deserved choice. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Goldsmith Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 8:36 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A beautiful couplet. I love your line. "God sees all of His creation,." And He Does. Have A blessed Autumn day..............
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 8:25 AM
How beautiful, Victor! Sighing…
Jones Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 8:02 AM
Each time I comment it goes to another poets comment page sorry. But enjoyed this write and congrats for the third time Victor!
Wolf Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 7:34 AM
Lovely turn of phrase, 'Sighing of a breeze' and such meaningful analogies thereto. Congrats on a richly deserved POTD, Victor. Best wishes, Gershon
Daniel Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 7:31 AM
Wow! great poem, love the comparison and the repeating line:) congrats on POTD too:)
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