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Sifting Sand From My Soul

If I had but one last sorrowful day of my life left, there would be words I would say without delay. Too long have I struggled, uncertain and bereft, my tongue silent as though mired in a pit of clay. Until now, I found myself sifting sand from my soul. Now, willing to bare my heart's unavowed affection, I must find the bravura to proclaim it and be bold, and yet I find myself fearing your gentlest rejection. Time warily squandered shall never be returned. So, I'm seeking courage to reveal what I am feeling, while hoping my sweet ardor shall not be spurned nor the love for you that I have long been concealing. Gleaming are stars hovering aloft in evening skies, but if gathered together, never could they outshine the luster I descry in the fulgent light in your eyes when the beat of your heart and mine finally align. When the pale moon rises to Heaven at zenith height, its glorious beauty shall emerge from a lunar eclipse. Not as seductively alluring to be with you on the night when alas I shall feel a kiss from your sensuous lips. Thereafter, sunlight shall yawn on the edge of dawn but your love shall warm me more than his golden rays. No greater fire is there to be compared with love born by your searing touch that easily sets my heart ablaze. If this is but a fantasy, I dare not lift tremulous eyes to see the response to my avowal, if on your face it is defined. I shall not bear the heartache if you turn away from me, for then it would be a benediction, if my eyes were blind. January 29, 2023 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 26 Contest Sponsored by Mark Toney Originally written in 2016 for a contest sponsored by John Hamilton

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Date: 2/6/2023 10:37:00 AM
Once again, Lin, you have dazzled us with your sparkling imagery and ponderings on a poetic subject in a plaintive poem from your yearning heart! Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you.
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/6/2023 10:58:00 AM
Your gracious remarks are so very welcome. Thank you, Sam.
Date: 2/5/2023 3:30:00 AM
I envisage the poem in the form of a letter to whoever it is meant. Romance. drips from the pen of Ms Lin Lane with so much heart. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 2/6/2023 10:57:00 AM
Your comments are so endearing, Gary. Thanks so very much.
Date: 2/4/2023 7:27:00 PM
Lin, I love this enchanting confession of a secret admirer preparing to come out of the shadows, “Now, willing to bare (her) heart’s unavowed affection…” and experience the “love born by (his) searing touch that easily sets (her) heart ablaze.” A Fave poem for me. Congratulations on your third-place podium finish on Mile 26 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon. Your support of my contest has contributed to its success, and for that I am very grateful. Poets who have qualified to enter the Qualifiers' FINAL Placement Contest are being notified by Soup Mail.
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Date: 2/6/2023 10:55:00 AM
Thanks so much for the many kind words you’ve given my poetry, Mark. I think I’ve worn out my sneakers!
Date: 2/4/2023 6:44:00 PM
Dear Lin, there is no denying the dynamic, dramatic, romantic power of your esteemed pen. Such soul-baring majesty steeps the poetic page in the grand sweep of your expressive finesse. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. I'm proud to share the podium with you and it's been such a pleasure running these many miles with you too, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/6/2023 10:53:00 AM
Thanks as ever for your complimentary thoughts, Susan. When you are crowned Top Winner, remember I called it. ;)
Date: 12/9/2016 10:37:00 AM
Just beautiful Lin, so glad you are gracing this little site with your wonderful writing, hope you will keep posting regularly. Please take a look at my, if you have courage poem, if you have time, I think you will like it! Have a great day!
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/13/2016 3:33:00 PM
Thank you, John. I've been out of town for a week so I've lots of reading to do.
Date: 11/29/2016 8:11:00 AM
Your Soul sings such a beautiful song as ever Lin. Such excellent words to drown within, to touch the heart . As akways your words sing out painting a beautiful canvas. Such gentleness, such love comes from the soul. As i ever said Lin, you have two homes, where people would welcome you with Love. This is excellent work as always. Your words are love, when you write love sings, as does the heart of the reader. A definite seven and a Fave. See you soon Lin. Love....Mike. XX
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/29/2016 10:43:00 PM
Hello dear Michael. I've been wondering about you and now here you are. Thanks so much for such kind words. I hope you're fine...keep in touch. ~Lin
Date: 11/21/2016 5:12:00 PM
wow , Lin this is amazing. it truly is, as Afolabi says, a gem. I will fave it!
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Date: 11/22/2016 6:10:00 AM
It makes me smile to know you like it. Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 11/20/2016 7:06:00 PM
Wow! This is a very romantic gem. Thanks for posting, i enjoyed the read......A.M.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/21/2016 11:15:00 AM
Thank you for the nice compliment, AM.
Date: 11/20/2016 3:07:00 PM
"Sunlight yawns at the edge of dawn," Your words always connect with my soul Lin. This is beautiful. Your ending expresses your sensitive vulnerability. 7 ; )
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Date: 11/21/2016 11:15:00 AM
I think you and I are related as kindred souls, Connie. Thank you for liking this one so well.
Date: 11/19/2016 5:15:00 PM
Yeah, I agree w/the other poets/poetesses. Your poem has wings of love. You write so elegantly beautiful. I'd fall in love w/you just from reading your poem, you uber talented woman. Very, very romantic poem. Great write. Love and joy to you and yours.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/23/2016 2:50:00 AM
Trust me, Lin ... you are so super talented, it ain't even funny, as we used to say back in the day. Love and peace to you and your golden pen.
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Date: 11/20/2016 8:26:00 AM
"Wings of love" what a beautiful comment, RW. Your next remark made me smile, and if I were in search of a new love I'd consider your poetic gift worth looking into further. haha Thanks so much for your encouraging comments. "Uber talented" That's a compliment I've never heard but it's a welcome one. Hugs.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/19/2016 5:17:00 PM
Btw, Lin. I am thrilled to hear your poetic voice again at the Soup. Yours is a voice worth hearing. Love and many blessings to you.
Date: 11/19/2016 9:10:00 AM
Excellent, Lin:) what more can I say? You've left me speechless:) a 7:)
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Date: 11/20/2016 8:23:00 AM
aww Jo. Thanks so much. I'm glad you were still able to write because I always enjoy reading you sweet comments.
Date: 11/18/2016 3:28:00 PM
Wonderful and full of emotion , Lin, I love reading Hugs Eve
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/18/2016 5:59:00 PM
Your comments are always a joy for me to read. Thank you, Eve.
Date: 11/18/2016 1:07:00 PM
This is so expressive, Lin. The heart holds many secrets. The fear of rejection is a deterrent, as you have aptly written in this line..."Yes fearing the gentlest rejection." The deeper the lover...the more keenly is felt the rejection, though it be gentle. I love the underlying passion and sensuality in this piece. Hugs
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/18/2016 3:06:00 PM
Helloooo Eileen. This was my 'once upon a time' long ago dilemma. Lol Thank you for your encouraging words. Nice to see you and big hugs.
Date: 11/18/2016 10:46:00 AM
Heavenly poetry, heavy ambivalence written with verve! I really like the way you wrote this uncertainty Lin!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/18/2016 11:17:00 AM
Thanks, Paloma. I'm appreciative of your sentiments.
Date: 11/18/2016 10:44:00 AM
This is great Lin...I'm sifting sand from my soul, Baring my heart's affection, finding bravura to be bold yet fearing gentlest rejection...if you make that the refrain it would make a beautiful song
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/18/2016 11:12:00 AM
oh my goodness, you're right. I guess I still have the mind set of writing lyrics to my ex's music. Thanks so much, Tim.
Date: 11/18/2016 10:19:00 AM
Don't wait Lin, tell him:) You're wasting time. So romantic!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/18/2016 10:36:00 AM
There's no one to tell, Danny. Some of the words materialized in a dream. Thanks for liking it.

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