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Sienna White

autumn winds rousing about
singed leaves of burnt sienna
twirling dance of sweet demise
  ~  bide snow wintry grave



AP: 1st place 2022

Submitted on September 30, 2020 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE - DODOITSU sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE  -  RANKED 1ST
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Krutsinger Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 7:07 AM
Without the photo, it is also as lovely!
Gauthier Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 1:24 PM
Thanks, the photo doesn't really add much I guess ~
Allison Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 2:52 PM
Really loved this one Line, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 8:17 PM
Thanks, Jan. Most appreciated.
La France Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 7:32 AM
Line, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me, nice image too .
Gauthier Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 3:15 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, Constance ~
Fowler Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 12:32 PM
I really enjoyed this one Line. Congratulations! Linda
Gauthier Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 2:58 PM
Thank you very much, Linda ~
Andresen Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 11:50 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 2:59 PM
Thank you so much, Sunshine ~
Mcintosh Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 3:25 AM
Lovely writing. I enjoyed this and wish you a win. God bless you
Gauthier Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 4:08 AM
Thank you so much, Regina ~
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