Sidewinder

A wave of heat undu- lates in the sun's rays like a pond sur- face blown by the wind. Does the hot pave- ment fry his B e l l y ?

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Cona Adams

Date: 7/31/2014 7:57:00 AM

Thank you, Keith, for reading and commenting on my poem. I do enjoy experimenting with different poetry forms.

Keith Merritt

Date: 7/30/2014 6:48:00 PM

Oh my, this is lovely. You have a good eye and a heart of wonder for this form. More , please !

Cona Adams

Date: 7/24/2014 5:42:00 AM

Thank you, Debbie. It was fun to write.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/23/2014 3:40:00 PM

Oh good one made me SMILE Light & Love

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/5/2014 7:51:00 AM

Very creative. Love the question at the end. Thank you for your visit to my poetry.

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/17/2014 8:57:00 PM

Awesome! I love this! great job, really really great

Cona Adams
Date: 4/18/2014 6:38:00 AM

Thanks, Casarah. I was sitting at a stoplight, and watched this black snake cross the intersection, like a wave, his head toward the light, his tail toward my car. When the light turned green, I drove on, wishing him luck with his journey.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/17/2014 9:21:00 AM

To cute! I know this is not nearly as easy as it looks...well done. BG

Cona Adams
Date: 4/17/2014 1:06:00 PM

Thanks, Barbara. I do enjoy the effort.

Donald Williams

Date: 4/17/2014 8:19:00 AM

LOL nice piece Cona and funny too

Cona Adams
Date: 4/17/2014 8:57:00 AM

Thanks. I love humor, and am making an effort to learn how to write it.