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Shy With No Regrets

SHY WITH NO REGRETS A Catholic uniform from age five. My own silence - how do I survive? My inner world is quiet, building bricks. The oldest young paints, with whispered flicks. The graham crackers and milk are my friends. I close my eyes - too many colors blend. The teacher called my mom, after so long. “Does your child talk or do I have it wrong?” In first grade I find my best friend, at last, but bashful eyes move, from busy boys - too fast. In sixth grade, fretting, I throw off my glasses, When a guy, I like, peeks in one of my classes. Too coy to attempt popularity, but it’s no regret. Looking back, glad my temperament slowly set. 4/20/2018 Line Gauthier’s An Early Childhood Memory Contest

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Date: 4/26/2018 3:54:00 AM
Beautifully penned, congratulations on your placement... Mick
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Date: 4/25/2018 8:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kim, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/25/2018 6:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2018 8:11:00 PM
Thanks, Sian!
Date: 4/25/2018 2:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well-written story.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2018 8:13:00 PM
Thanks, Susan!
Date: 4/25/2018 9:56:00 AM
I like the introspection, Kim. Well penned. Congrats on your bronze medal win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2018 10:07:00 AM
Thank you, Line! Poetry is cathartic! Helps us to go back and have a return on our life’s investment.
Date: 4/20/2018 2:10:00 PM
Love your childhood poem, Kim. There's nothing wrong with being shy...you get more chance to listen and learn. Many waste their time hearing their own loud voices! Glad that there are no regrets:) Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/20/2018 3:53:00 PM
Thanks, Paul!
Date: 4/20/2018 12:33:00 PM
Sweet poem; very well done. It's a winner!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/20/2018 3:53:00 PM
Thanks, Caren! <3
Date: 4/20/2018 10:25:00 AM
Our childhood does trace our path of the life we live! Dear memories in our heart we keep, precious moments of love! Excellent and touching couplet dearest. Kim! Good luck!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/20/2018 3:54:00 PM
Thank you, Demetrios!
Date: 4/20/2018 8:56:00 AM
A beautifully evocative personal view of childhood. The subtle observations of the interaction between the inner and outer worlds, without self pity, are very appealing, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/20/2018 9:09:00 AM
Thanks so much, my friend!
Date: 4/20/2018 8:36:00 AM
Very well written, Kim. The world is quite an overwhelming place to one so young. It's like leaving the womb again.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/20/2018 9:08:00 AM
So true!
Date: 4/20/2018 8:26:00 AM
Nice nostalgic look back memory lane Kim - Well written - Good luck in the Contest...Maria xxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/20/2018 9:07:00 AM
Thanks, Maria!
Date: 4/20/2018 7:56:00 AM
A lovely verse looking back at your childhood Kim, It is a big shock to the system when you start school for the first time. Tom Good Luck.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/20/2018 7:58:00 AM
Yes...it is! I was a big talker at home, but in school hardly a peep. Thanks, Tom!

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