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Shy Guy's Awakening

He lay upon her bed, his slender face supported by one palm that cupped his chin. His other hand turned pages in a book. He’d come there to escape the downstairs’ din, for only in her room could he find peace. She’d said that he could read there on her bed and then collapsed to take her little nap. Next, all the others left to see their show. (he wondered why he’d not been asked to go, while she’d declined to go when asked at dinner). Now all alone with “Miss Sophisticate” was he, the one that they all called the “Shy Guy.” The silence of the empty house awoke her. Her breathing changed; he sensed her body shift. Her eyes stayed closed, but he could feel her inching much nearer to him; then the slightest nudge, and tingles down his thigh began to run. . . and still he felt compelled to turn each page though print beneath his eyes began to fade. He knew her eyes had opened to a gaze, two emeralds that almost seemed to blaze. He didn’t say a word, and then he heard: “Just what’s so interesting about that book?” He looked, and then she took him by surprise. She whispered, “Shy, why don’t you study me? Don’t tell me that you haven’t felt the vibes. We rarely get to meet, but when we do, I see you watching me. Now we’re alone!” Just how they came to kiss he can’t recall. Perhaps they’d talked a bit. He doesn’t know. He only can remember tender lips that whet his appetite for something more. A burning had begun, by her inspired, and how would he extinguish that sweet fire? For lost, he momentarily forgot. . . . He touched instinctively her budding breasts. She moved his hands away from them and said, “Shy, I think you know this can go nowhere.” He felt the flush of guilt she must have read, for then she added, “Please let’s not feel bad. Although I guess down south we could get married, it’s best we second cousins just be kissin’!”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/4/2014 9:01:00 AM
Andrea This is a steamy, passionate, sexy, and extremely hot write, with a little humor at the end. I need to take a cold shower now. LOL Thank you for the fun comment on my Gift poem.
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Date: 2/26/2012 4:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement in Joe Flach's "Twisted Minds" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/25/2012 5:30:00 PM
Thanks for entering my contest Andrea and congratulations on your HM. Poor guy!!!! "I guess down south we could get married" ... what a hoot!!!!! And, who could resist "budding breats" - second cousins or not? That's why I never kissed any of mine! ;-)
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Date: 8/25/2011 5:09:00 PM
Sorry for the delay-Thanks so much for entering my contest-A big congrats. to you :) Very 'twisted' and great twist Andrea :)
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Date: 8/22/2011 3:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Natalie's "Burlesque Twist" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2011 7:45:00 PM
ut oh! best not to go there!!! congrad's on this most creative win! light & love
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:18:00 AM
LOL, love it. Yes, it's a pity your older work has been removed - I enjoyed reading older entries too. Oh, well, Many congratulations, my friend : )
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Date: 8/19/2011 9:57:00 AM
congratulations on your win Andrea! glad it made the winner's list!
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Date: 8/18/2011 9:03:00 PM
Good job. Well done Tony
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Date: 8/18/2011 2:57:00 AM
hey Andrea, congrats on your win David
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Date: 8/18/2011 1:21:00 AM
Oh I saw this before and thought it was really cute. Congratulations Andrea. You just past me in the standings. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/17/2011 10:46:00 PM
way to go Andrea my friend on a super win in this contest with this terrific entry luv... oh wow..
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Date: 8/14/2011 2:02:00 PM
Oh wow, Andrea :D! I totally loved and enjoyed reading this! This sure got me hooked then Haha, you ended this with such a perfect twist (you sure got me with this one!!) Very clever write, and a hottie from the start and ends with a twist, I bet this is a top winner! I sure hope so!! Hugs to you-- I am going for now...
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Date: 8/14/2011 1:34:00 PM
A tale well told. Good, steady build-up, with a twist at the end. Nice one! xoxo Robert.
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Date: 8/13/2011 4:23:00 PM
A real surprise at the end - another sure winner, my friend
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Date: 8/13/2011 11:52:00 AM
oh so sorry your pain is more than what my meds to relieve will do for u Andrea.. it must be awful to live with that till it heals... putting u back on our prayer chain for instant healing and relief luv.. enjoy a great weekend.my friend...luv..
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Date: 8/13/2011 3:25:00 AM
Andrea, you are soooo sharp...It never occured to me that it had a naughty little boy angle to that triplet..what I had in mind was the not so little boy thing, jag
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Date: 8/12/2011 10:59:00 PM
thankxx for your encouraging comments Andrea on my contest entries .. seems soon as I see a contest posted my creative juices begin flowing with words for it.. and since we had so much fun yesterday ..I thought I better get these done today ..we will be leaving for vaca Aug. 20th.. seems cannot post a blog all day.. need two more entries to udge my "DISNEY" contest..oh..happy weekend..
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Date: 8/12/2011 6:46:00 PM
A very nice one Andrea, I love it, it's just so good! goodluck in he contest.
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Date: 8/12/2011 3:15:00 PM
Good lead up into the twist - poor shy guy. being cousins trumps chemistry.
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Date: 8/12/2011 10:13:00 AM
This one was very suspenseful Andrea. Kept my interest. Good luck. Haven't tried it. I was as surprised as you that I had entered my poem as a Lanterne after you pointed it out.. I don't know where that came from. I must have been choosing the form when my computer blocked me out. I know several times I had to go back to see if my poems had actuallly entered. I have been having a terrible time getting on. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/12/2011 7:29:00 AM
oh, my... it stopped short of getting too sensual... this clearly is winning stuff..all the best..then about that girl in Nette's contest I think you could be right..I did not think too much about what the girl was actually doing..wish you well and thanks, jag
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Date: 8/12/2011 5:30:00 AM
Oh dear a tease, the come on please, but nipped in the bud so sweet, enchanted story that you told, the emerald eyes so calmy bold, well done when cousins meet:) if incomplete...
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Date: 8/12/2011 3:58:00 AM
Oohoohoo Y'all oughta be ashamed of yoreselves. Good write my friend, Good entry for the contest. Good luck. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/12/2011 3:53:00 AM
oh you twister, andie... like the strity; almost did the same but went the other way.. super hit this one.. winning wishes.. this soup hopefully is working well now.. arggh!! are you okay??:) huggs, nette
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