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The minute our eyes met it was love at first sight I knew you were the perfect one for me my parents tried to keep us apart but I simply couldn’t let you go My father tried to persuade me are you really sure he’s the one? It’s not too late to change your mind… I smiled my sweetest smile - Dad knew when he was beaten I skipped out of the toy shop .... nestling in my arms, my birthday teddy bear! Contest –Free Verse Love Poem Sponsored By Laura Loo 07~24~15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/24/2016 1:27:00 PM
Oh, that was a nice, twist, Jan. Wasn't expecting the Teddy Bear. Congrats!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/30/2016 2:50:00 PM
I like to have a twist at the end of some of my poems:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2016 10:38:00 AM
so cute lovely Jan! congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/30/2016 2:49:00 PM
Thanks so much LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/28/2015 4:13:00 PM
Simply shweet Jan, simply delightful to read ~ hugs//James xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/28/2015 4:26:00 PM
I had fun with this one James i do get inspired by many of the contests:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/5/2015 4:10:00 PM
A wistful and glorious write, your beautiful work rest appropriately on the Winner's stand! Much applause, Jan!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/5/2015 4:18:00 PM
Thanks so much Dave - do drop by my 2 blogs if you have a moment - wonderful news!!!! hugs jan xxx
Date: 8/1/2015 10:34:00 PM
Jan, big congrats on your win! Teddy bears are adorable and so are sweet little girls. Mine is all grown up but still just as sweet! a7
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/2/2015 4:42:00 AM
Thanks so much Robert for the lovely comment:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/31/2015 9:19:00 PM
I love your sweet and cute poem my dear friend, Jan! Many warm congrats on your win! Hugs and cheers! Thank you so much for sharing! love lots, Leonora
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/1/2015 3:51:00 AM
Thanks Leonora:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/30/2015 4:14:00 PM
Oh Jan you toyed with me again you scamp, congratulations on your winning entry.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/30/2015 4:19:00 PM
lol I have written a few twisted ones lately:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/30/2015 2:26:00 PM
Cute twist at the end of this one, Jan! Congrats on your win :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/30/2015 2:39:00 PM
Thanks Laura:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/30/2015 1:23:00 PM
Hi Jan, just swinging back to offer big congratulations on your win! Kind regards. Pandita
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/30/2015 1:32:00 PM
Thanks Pandita:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/30/2015 12:37:00 PM
Haha! How adorable! Is that Little Jan starring in this story? Congrats on your win. xoxo
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/30/2015 12:38:00 PM
Noooo although i was definitely a teddy girl i NEVER played with dolls! Hugs jan xx
Date: 7/30/2015 7:36:00 AM
congratulaions, teddy bears always win
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/30/2015 12:39:00 PM
Uh... Jan... I don't mean to pry but... are you a "Plushie"? heh heh
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/30/2015 7:59:00 AM
They sure do Frederic:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/30/2015 7:35:00 AM
Smiling had me hooked, and I bet you still have your Teddy. Congrats on your win!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/30/2015 7:59:00 AM
I do lol :-) he's called lying on teddy because I used to lie on him:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/30/2015 7:32:00 AM
Soft and squishy, short and sweet, I know I read this before and loved it, and again the same. Nicely done ;)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/30/2015 7:58:00 AM
Thanks Cas:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/30/2015 3:43:00 AM
jan, Congratulations on your SHWEET Free Verse Win. **SKAT**
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/30/2015 3:54:00 AM
Thanks Skat:-) hugs jan x
Date: 7/30/2015 12:36:00 AM
So cute and sweet! Congrats on your win! ~lee
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/30/2015 1:51:00 AM
Thanks Lee:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/29/2015 11:51:00 PM
Wonderful write Jan! Glad that u listened to ur heart !Congrats on big win!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/30/2015 1:51:00 AM
Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/29/2015 11:48:00 PM
Jan, it was that ending that got you a high placement with me. I adored my teddy bear too. Congrats, sweetie. This was cute.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/30/2015 1:50:00 AM
Thanks Andrea - it was a shweet contest contest:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/28/2015 8:05:00 AM
Awe, this is a sweet twist you always have me thinking it is something else and surprise me at the end. Wonderful write and good luck a 10+++ hugs eve
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/28/2015 9:09:00 AM
Aww thanks Eve especially for the ++ rating lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/26/2015 7:04:00 AM
Very clever, luck Jan.
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Date: 7/26/2015 7:34:00 AM
Thanks James:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/25/2015 2:03:00 PM
An adorable and very sweet poem, Jan. I just loved that unexpected ending! It made me smile too :) ...Good luck in Andrea's contest!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/25/2015 2:05:00 PM
Thanks Kelly I hope Andrea likes it too:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/25/2015 5:54:00 AM
I loved your teddy bear ending, Jan. Great fun write. I withdrew my entry, you were right it was not sweet. ~~Darlene
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/25/2015 6:58:00 AM
Anyway, Jan, I kept the poem and revised it. But just not for the contest. In case you want to read it. Hugs, Darlene
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/25/2015 6:32:00 AM
Oh Darlene I hope you write another - I am just not a spider fan lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/25/2015 12:57:00 AM
Love your clincher at the end.. Set up perfectly. You master these clever writes, Jan. So proud of your continued growth and grateful for your friendship!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/25/2015 3:28:00 AM
We were newbies together Dave and will always have that special friendship:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/25/2015 12:08:00 AM
Hi Jan, you are indeed a great writer. You know how to engage your audience ,take them on journey and their arrival is a unspected place. Excellent job! Good luck in the contest:-)Alexis
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/25/2015 3:28:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Alexis - I think I have come a long long way since I started writing last year! Hugs jan xx
Date: 7/24/2015 10:53:00 PM
As always, you have that final surprise twist after gradual AND engaging development, Jan. A sweet write indeed. This is another winner! hugs!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/25/2015 3:27:00 AM
I hope Andrea likes it Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/24/2015 9:20:00 PM
Dear Jan, this is such a lovely piece with a delightful, shweet surprising ending! I enjoyed this clever write and expect to see it on the winners list! It's a 7! Warmest regards. Pandita
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/24/2015 9:22:00 PM
Thanks Pandita - it is a lovely idea for the contest I have read some delightful poems:-) hugs Jan xx
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