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...glass shattered sharp words broke rare seconds of peace a slammed door masked the silent echo of tears no one to hold helplessness no hope to caress- to console. A limp dragging broom brushing the slivers of sobs into a twinkling pile of nothings but broken yesterdays and dreaded tomorrows and wishes better spent on these rare moments of silence for a child too scared to yell Mommy

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Date: 1/10/2024 6:32:00 AM
Hello Craig, thanks for pointing the way to your poem. Abuse is horrible and many times an abuse survivor feels silenced by time. Thanks my friend for helping to free our voice through poetry. - Blessings, Daniel!
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Date: 7/8/2017 8:22:00 AM
I was just led to this one Craig. This is so powerful and written so well. Heartbreaking and true for many who are and were abused as children can relate to this. very well done!!!
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Craig Cornish
Date: 8/2/2017 3:07:00 PM
Wow, I get it now----mine is fiction, yours is real-XXOO
Date: 6/30/2017 8:16:00 PM
Excellent poem, Craig. Life is hard. Harder for some than others. Children suffer the most. Very emotive write!
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Date: 6/30/2017 3:22:00 PM
In the past I worked with kids who had suffered abuse so your words and imagery cut through me like a knife Craig - exceptional free verse!!! :-) hugs Jan xx
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