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Naani 4 lines 20-25 syllables

shower shoes sloshing, soapy, slippery, and teeming with colossal cleanliness, toweled, culpable

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Paige Hind

Date: 1/31/2024 1:59:00 PM

Ah, wow. Unique perspective.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2024 5:56:00 PM

Thank you! :)

Bill Baker

Date: 1/27/2024 9:35:00 PM

Nice alliteration is this one, Kim. Intriguing form of poetry. Good luck if a contest entry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2024 4:21:00 AM

Thank you, Billa!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/27/2024 8:33:00 PM

Guilty as charged Guilty as charged, those shower shoes. ~ Mr. Mindfulness

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2024 4:22:00 AM

Thanks for catching the nuance of the poem ;)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/27/2024 3:40:00 PM

alliteration on steroids :-) I liked it...I'm impressed

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2024 7:41:00 PM

Thank you, Sara!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/27/2024 2:16:00 PM

Love the alliteration. This is nicely written, Kim. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2024 3:16:00 PM

Thank you, Evelyn!

Silent One

Date: 1/27/2024 6:33:00 AM

IS this a new form? Looks interesting..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2024 9:55:00 AM

Sent you Soup Mail.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/26/2024 10:18:00 PM

It's, indeed a tongue-twister and an example of mastery over perfect alliteration.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2024 9:50:00 AM

Thank you so much, my friend!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/26/2024 7:50:00 PM

' shower shoes sloshing, soapy, slippery. ' Oh, my ! This could be a tongue twister. :) Your thoughts bring a smile, Kim. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2024 9:48:00 AM

Thanks, Brandy!

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/26/2024 6:32:00 PM

beautiful emotions, enjoyed yann

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2024 6:40:00 PM

Thank you, Yann!