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Showdown At Soup Creek

It was now growing dark as the sun was going down
When a stranger rode into Soup Creek, a frontier town
No one could see his face, he was all dressed in black
An old boy was heard to say "I think he's come back".

He took his horse to the stable, then went to the boarding house
Before he went in looked across the street, to the town jailhouse
There was a familiar figure sat outside, in a rocking chair
Cradling a Winchester and the stranger, felt his cold stare.

He'd returned after all these years;  he had something to prove
And just after a few days back in town, he would make his move
But Sheriff Koplin is no fool and he had planned up far ahead
And had formed a posse whilst the stranger slept in his bed.

Three fiesty girls from the saloon, Jan and Jenna, Tania too
And a Texas ranger called David who was just passing through
With gambler Milton who was deadly, with a colt forty five
And Tom the undertaker who looked more dead than alive.

It was the evening of the showdown; the stranger came out of the saloon
The sun was now setting but the tension had been building up since noon
From his holster he withdrew his pistol and then fired shots up into the air
The stranger was not one for living a peaceful life and he just didn't care.

Sheriff Koplin approached him and said "Hand over your gun" 
And the stranger replied "Lighten up man, I'm just having fun"
The stranger was laughing now and looking down at his feet
The townsfolk were nervous and had disappeared off the street.

Then behind the stranger came a shout in a loud Texas drawl
It was Jenna disguised as an old woman, covered with a shawl
"You heard the sheriff " she shouted, "Put your gun on the ground"
The air was now thick with tension and you couldn't hear a sound.

Then from nowhere the rest of the posse appeared pistols in hand
They abhorred bullies and conflict and were prepared to make a stand
The stranger realised he couldn't win and threw his gun down
Walked to the livery stable to get his horse, and rode out of town.

The drama was now over but it could have gone either way
Sheriff Koplin and his posse restored peace, and had won the day
It was now days end in Soup Creek in that peaceful frontier town
All you could hear were chirping crickets as the sun was going down.


Written on 20th May 2022.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 4:46 AM
What a wonderful classic style of story-telling, Tom! and the western story reminds me of recent gun-violence incidents! wish those incidents ended up like this!Thank you for bringing these classic poems with your incredible story-telling style. To my faves, Tom. Best wishes ~ Mala
Cunningham Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 5:02 AM
Thank you very much Mala, it was inspired by recent events on soup, thankfully peace has now returned to Soup Creek. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Romios Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 9:51 AM
Should have been a POTD! Pangie
Cunningham Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 12:20 PM
No I'm happy to stand aside, there's more deserving poets than me. Tom
Watt Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 4:01 PM
I guess a sheriff's work is never done, Tom. This is a shot across the bow for anyone who thinks bullying is welcome in Soup Creek.
Cunningham Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 4:11 PM
Thank you very much John, strangers come and go but the good folks of Soup Creek will be waiting. Hope alls well. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 1:08 PM
As always a great storyteller!
Cunningham Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 2:40 PM
Thank you Kim, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Krutsinger Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 10:12 AM
I wish the old westerns would have done this "Sheriff Koplin approached him and said hand over your gun And the stranger replied "lighten up man, I'm just having fun"" - reminds me of Blazing Saddles with Mel Brooks
Cunningham Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 10:26 AM
Thank you Caren, that movie is a real hoot. Tom
La France Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 8:10 AM
Tom, wow, your story telling is awesome, and what a great story it is too, blessings ~Constance
Cunningham Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 8:39 AM
Thank you very much Constance, it was inspired by recent events in Soup Creek. Hope you're well. Tom
Baker Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 7:13 AM
Another great one Tom. Thanks for putting the situation into a poetic story form. You did well my friend. Bill
Cunningham Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 8:38 AM
Thank you very much Bill. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it, Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Y. Avatar
May 24, 2022 at 8:28 PM
WoW! Tom, This is a well-written and clever piece. I enjoyed it from start to finish. You know I love western stories. You are an amazing storyteller. That stranger should have known what he would get if goes messin around in Soup Creek. This is going straight in to my fav collection. Excellent job:-)Alexis
Cunningham Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 6:12 AM
Thank you very much Alexis, I share your passion for westerns. This was inspired by recent events on soup, Even Jenna and Milton were inspired to continue the saga. Thank you too for the fave. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Mcconnell Avatar
May 24, 2022 at 10:52 AM
Great to have a good old western before us again Tom, you tell this extremely well. Showing great rhyme and flow with real insightfulness. Blessings always,Gordon
Cunningham Avatar
May 24, 2022 at 11:03 AM
Thank you Gordon, as you've probably guessed I love westerns, this was inspired by recent shenanigans here on soup. Glad you enjoyed it. Tom
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 24, 2022 at 10:29 AM
You've spun an incredible story, Tom! Jenna pointed me to your poem since I had no idea what was going on, but I do remember the culprit. Some people never change...it's very sad. There are so many wonderful and encouraging poets here. Why someone needs to tear others down for nothing more than attention is beyond my understanding. Rhonda xx
Cunningham Avatar
May 24, 2022 at 10:36 AM
Thank you very much Rhonda, it's a site where we can post our poetry and enjoy reading others but occasionally you get one that just wants to cause trouble and upset. The 'stranger `I refer to caused many to leave soup. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Edmonds  Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 10:13 AM
A magnificent write Tom, the stranger wouldn’t have the cheek now to return to Soup Creek, would he? … Belle
Edmonds  Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 11:53 AM
All is going well, slow but sure we’re getting there… Belle
Cunningham Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 10:19 AM
Thank you very much Belle, I hope not, Soup Creek is a peaceful town. Hope things are okay with you. Tom
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 6:16 AM
I smiled all the way through this relatable tale with its happy ending. You are the best at story telling Tom. Let’s hope things remain peaceful in Soup Creek. Blessings xxoo
Cunningham Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 6:52 AM
Thank you very much Connie, glad you enjoyed it. It does get a little Stormy on here sometimes so let's hope we have calm waters. Hope you're well. Tom
Hinshaw Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 3:53 PM
Tom: I love the old west and I live right in the middle of it here in Colorado. This would make a great movie! You have more knowledge about the old west and American history than most American high school and college grads! Impressive! BobH
Cunningham Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 4:56 AM
Thank you very much Bob, grew up watching westerns and read loads of books, my favourite author was Louis L'Amour. Hope alls well in Colorado. Tom
Proxenos Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 9:25 AM
Hi Tom, What a lesson the Sheriff, the posse and the women folk and other town folk taught this big mouthed egotist. He wanted to create a scene for no reason at all, loved the way this poems was written, the stranger revelling in his come-back, had to disappear with his tail between his legs. Hope his kind and people like him keep their own council wherever or whoever they are. I foresee a victory with this write! Well penned my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.
Cunningham Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 9:32 AM
Thank you very much Jennifer, it was inspired by recent events here on the soup. The stranger decided to leave town, for how long no one knows. Tom
Romios Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 2:09 AM
This is fabulous, Tom. I love it, Pangie
Cunningham Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 3:20 AM
Thank you Pangie, a bit of humour to start the day. Tom
Ball Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 7:43 AM
Loved the story Tom. You told it well with great imagery. I could see it all unfold before me as I read. Nice job as usual. God Bless, JB
Cunningham Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 8:49 AM
Thank you very much Judy, im happy that you enjoyed the story. Tom
Shaw Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 5:00 AM
Just loved the subtle way you drew in some of the Souper's, Tom, you're such a master of the narrative, enjoyed . . . : )
Cunningham Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 5:42 AM
Thank you very much Indiana, it was inspired by recent events on here but happy to say there's now peace in Soup Creek. Hope you're well. Tom
Messina Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 4:18 AM
Love this. Tom. Great story telling as usual. Smiles in the morn for me :) Hope all is well. Charlie
Cunningham Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 5:41 AM
Thank you very much Charlie, I'm glad you enjoyed it. All good here, I hope you are too. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 3:38 AM
A good story in poetic form. I wonder has there been conflict on soup once again. LOL..Sometimes things can get really interesting on here. Thanks for your visit to my page. I wonder do you enjoy raspberries? Sara
Cunningham Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 5:40 AM
Thank you very much Sara, there was but the stranger has now left town. Tom
George Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 3:14 AM
Thank God, the confrontation didn't end in blood shed or violence ! Interesting narration, you famed story teller....
Cunningham Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 5:39 AM
Thank you very much Valsa I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Tom
Wolf Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 3:56 PM
'Soup Creek' - Critics rave! In fact, quoth the Raven: 'Evermore!' Terrific, Tom. Or should I say, 'Tom Terrific?!' Cheers, Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 5:12 PM
Lol thanks Gershon, glad you enjoyed the saga of Soup Creek. I do cheap funerals, mates rates lol Tom
Kitchin Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 3:49 PM
Tom, ha ha, wonderfully penned and creative, thank you so much for including me in your poem, maybe the stranger will get a clue and leave soup creek! A fave!
Cunningham Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 5:11 PM
Thank you very much Tania, you're a guardian of the soup not afraid to speak out against wrongdoers. Thanks too for the fave. Have a lovely weekend. Tom
Brown  Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 2:57 PM
Brilliant! Well done! Glad all is good in Soup town :-)
Cunningham Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 3:03 PM
Lol thanks Lisa, there won't be any more trouble in Soup Creek, we have Sheriff Koplin in charge now. Tom
Brown  Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 2:58 PM
Ooops Soup Creek even!
Leffanta Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 11:17 AM
Wow! I am in awe that you could write this with your mind on the Ukraine and your body on the Great Wall of China . . . Enjoyed! Aloha!
Cunningham Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 11:25 AM
Lol, thanks Rico, Fear not I haven't forgotten Ukraine, watch this space. PS, Macchu Pitchu here we come. Tom
M  Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 11:17 AM
Haha …..so cleverly funny Tom. Great poem……Debx
Cunningham Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 11:23 AM
Thank you very much Deb, glad you enjoyed it, Soup Creek is a peaceful town and we aim to keep it that way. Tom
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