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Show No Fear

my breathing quickens waking me with a start I bump into a long fat slimy thing a tongue? I reach around and discover it is much larger in daylight, scary. in the dark, shocking. bumpy, and unbelievably cold and rugged what are you doing up here? I ask Herman my pet alligator who lives in the back room I heard a noise, he says. I was scared. I turn and see his gleaming white teeth in the dark. They shine like a neon moon. Suddenly I feel a bit scared myself. Show no fear A voice warns me Too late….

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Date: 9/16/2019 8:24:00 PM
lol... I loved this one my friend. A favorite for sure. hehe. Ann
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/17/2019 7:27:00 AM
Thank you Ann. Smile. Chuckle.
Date: 9/16/2019 10:37:00 AM
He he hee oh, what a delight of a read! Thank you Caren!!! xomo
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/17/2019 7:27:00 AM
You are welcome Maureen.
Date: 9/16/2019 9:06:00 AM
I wouldn't dare to keep alligator as a pet--you are quite fearless my friend. That ending left me breathless..was the feeling of being afraid well warranted? You captured the moment well, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/17/2019 7:27:00 AM
Thank you very much Vijay. I always laugh when my poems end up with me being eaten, maimed or whatever.

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