Show Me the Way

So long have I harped of regret,
For price of vice is not paid yet,
With rueful heart, Lord, now I pray;
O God, won't you show me the way.

Contrite in careless deeds of yore,
As mindless acts morals abhor,
I seek amends, and humbly say;
O God, won't you show me the way.

With remorse I sail for morrow,
Steer life’s ship through pain and sorrow,
And vow, all debts, I shall repay;
O God, won't you show me the way.

In lonesome past alone I moan,
For blunders made now I atone,
And pledge your edicts, I'll obey;
O God, won't you show me the way.

Though evil lurks, tries to cajole,
While, toll immoral, taxes soul,
From goodwill divine I won't stray;
O God, won't you show me the way.

Written: January 12, 2023
Placed 1st: Revealing Your Soul…Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Soto Poet
Form: Kyrielle (eight syllables per line)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Situation Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 4:22 PM
Looks like something I would write. Pure and simple.
Buehler Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 1:43 PM
A soul stirring, beautiful prayer, Vijay. Remarkably written. :)
Seeker Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 12:24 AM
Cry of a devout soul! All answers lie within. Beautiful write, Vijay, enjoyed every word
Fowler Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 10:13 AM
Beautiful homage in a perfect form Vijay. :)
Pandit Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 3:03 PM
Many thanks, Linda--much appreciate.
Daniel Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 10:41 PM
This is a beautiful prayer, Vijay, congratulations:)
Pandit Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 3:02 PM
Thank you Jo--much appreciate.
Proxenos Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 11:33 AM
Hi Vijay, i lost my previous, validation somehow, your poem which I see as a pledge to God, moved me and brought me to tears, Blessings, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 3:02 PM
Thanks again, Jennifer.
Proxenos Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 10:25 AM
And I predict this will be POTD tomorrow my friend. What a wonderful pledge you made to God - I'm Certain God heard you loud and clear and you brought me to faithful tears! Congratulations on your win. Hugs and blessings Vijay, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 3:02 PM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 8:59 AM
Well done, Vijay! Kyrielle is such a great way to poetically pray! Congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 3:01 PM
Thank you my friend. Much appreciate.
Canerdy Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 4:25 PM
A huge CONGRATS on your really well-deserved win with this deeply spiritual poem, Vijay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 3:01 PM
Many thanks Janice--much appreciate.
Maverick Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 1:58 PM
So a win here then Vijay.. I'm not surprised The reality you bring to the reader Can be verified by any such Who have lived I shall put A little' and by ohers A little Too much..'
Pandit Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 3:01 PM
Thank you Jo--much appreciate.
Roper Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 11:02 AM
Congratulations on your win in Lasaad's contest, Vijay. Great journey of an open confessions, and prayers . Many Blessings My Friend
Pandit Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 12:54 PM
So glad to read your kind remarks. Many thanks, Eve.
Alex Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 9:41 PM
"price of vice is not paid yet", "From goodwill divine I won't stray; O God, won't you show me the way" - Great work. Congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 12:54 PM
Thank you Christuraj--much appreciate.
George Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 8:34 PM
Back to your beautiful prayer with Congratulations on your First place win in Sotto Poet's Contest.
Pandit Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 12:54 PM
Thank you for your return visit, Valsa. Much appreciate, as always.
Peck Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 10:34 AM
A beautiful prayer, Vijay. Congratulations on your win!
Pandit Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 12:52 PM
Glad you liked the poem, Ann. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Jayasankar Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 9:08 AM
A prayer straight from the heart, apt for the contest in Kyriele form Vijayji... nice rhymes too... Am sure this will win great... God bless... ~ Ani
Pandit Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 12:51 PM
Much appreciate your kind remarks, Ani. Many thanks for visiting and commenting.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 7:23 AM
A great spiritual poem which reminds me of a song I hear every day on YouTube. "God will find a Way" Great win and a fav.
Pandit Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 12:50 PM
So nice to read your comments. I am honored by your FAVE, Victor. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.
Poet Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 6:07 AM
Congratulations on your top contest win with this fantastic poem, Vijay. Blessings
Pandit Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 12:50 PM
Much appreciate, Lasaad. Many thanks for sponsoring contests.
George Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 8:10 AM
A humble and heartfelt prayer, expressing contrition over your past blunders and flaws with a resolve not to repeat them. Definitely God will show you the way. All the Best in the contest, dear friend.
Pandit Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 3:51 PM
Thank you my friend for stopping by with your kind insights. Much appreciate, as always, Valsa. Many thanks.
Rose  Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 3:35 PM
How can God refuse a request made with such an ardent heart, he will not, I'm sure, love your poem Vijay and your soul spirit. It shows through everything you share :)
Pandit Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 5:59 AM
So very kind of you Vienna. Enjoyed reading your kind remarks. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
DiMino Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 9:29 AM
Such an outstanding prayer, declaration! Each day we have the opportunity for new birth, to become a reborn being in the eyes of man and our God. Though men may wish not to see the change, for no prophet is honored in his/her own town, God sees all~ judging only our hearts and not their perilous journeys. A FAV!
Pandit Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 10:56 AM
Honored to receive your FAVE, Joe. Your analysis, as always, is on mark my friend. Many thanks for your insights. And a very special thank you for your comments and for the FAVE.
Nicole Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 9:00 AM
Through trials, heartache and doubt, even when moments are low and you're in the valley- God is always near. My heart rejoices knowing this truth. God will always show a way of escape. Your thoughts are beautiful, tender and so uplifting. Many wonderful blessings to you, Vijay. Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 10:54 AM
Yes, the presence of almighty is always soothing and omnipresent. Delighted to read your feedback, as always, my friend. Hugs and blessings to you as well, Brandy. Many thanks.
Cunningham Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 8:47 AM
With all the demands life makes on us it's easy to lose our way and we cry out for spiritual help as our pride gets in the way and we feel unable to seek help elsewhere. Well written Vijay and best of luck in the contest. Tom
Pandit Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 10:50 AM
Always appreciate your presence on Soup and of course, on my page. Much appreciate your insightful remarks, Tom. Many thanks.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 7:01 AM
Your "Show Me the Way" is a wonderful write. Good Luck. Have a blessed day.................
Pandit Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 10:49 AM
Glad you liked the poem, Paula. Happy to read your kind remarks. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Sands Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 6:43 AM
Oh I love this faithful poem. I can feel this and it is also inspiring and comforting! A Fave for me :)
Pandit Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 10:48 AM
Glad you found the poem inspiring, my friend. Much appreciate your supportive comments, as always, Heidi. Honored by your FAVE. Many thanks.
Kendrick Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 6:27 AM
Great faith based work for Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Pandit Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 10:46 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments, Sara. Many thanks for stopping by with your kind remarks.
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