Shortening the Distance

This dreadful and unpleasant thought
to reach the end of every road...
never occurred as I carried my load;
wasn't happiness what I sought?


As a very young man with contagious smiles,
I only saw fun days and romantic nights,
assuming they always brought joy, never strife...
but how close was I getting to the other life? 


They warned me to be as cautious as a lizard,
to walk slowly and steadily look forward;
their words I didn't heed; even mother with her sixth sense
noticed I was going too fast, thus shortening the distance.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Prabhu Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 8:32 PM
congrats Andrew.. i liked your work.
Johnson Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 12:50 PM
Congratulations on your big win with this delightful poem, Andrew. Love, Joyce
Scholtz Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 11:35 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrew, enjoyed reading your worh. Elizabeth
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January 12, 2012 at 10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrew
Brown Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Show Me Again" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 12:07 PM
Outstanding poem you share with us today Andrew. I thank you. Love, Carol
Squyres Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 11:48 AM
As a child we can't wait to grow up...seeing with a childs eye. As adults we wish we were younger with out the difficulties that come with being independent. Very good write..Enjoyed your poem.
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