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Shopping Center Blackbird

** Shopping Center Blackbird ** He, rising in defense of the others, Presenting himself, to all with ears To hear and before all eyes, The black, flapping silhouette atop The silver, double-bulbed street lamp; This loudest shrieking, Not to be ignored Blackbird, Appearing actually, Half the size of his declaring all This territory his own — That expanse of dark blue Paved spaces, surrounded At a slight distance from an oval line of trees — Yet he returns from his diverting Watch of the over-all To nest to rest hidden in security And warmth, all tucked away Behind the green “Y” of The “Subway” store’s shopping center sign. ——————————————————————————————- (c) sally young eslinger 3/22 Thanks be to God

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Date: 3/24/2022 2:55:00 PM
When I was in Flagstaff, AZ, I was amazed by how big the blackbirds were, and so possessive of their territory too! They are apparently very smart~
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Date: 3/11/2022 9:25:00 AM
Very nice poem. It's always interesting to see how animals live in the world we've created.
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Date: 3/11/2022 7:07:00 AM
I like this analogy, a bit like how some humans are, especially world leaders, with their minds.... you always write thought provoking poems..
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