Shooting Stars Be Careful How You Explain Them

~Shooting Stars~
Persied is back, he travels every year they say,
Why does he come to us? I heard a little child say
Persied is a shooting star…the mother simply said
Well why don’t they shoot him then so that he is dead?

Don’t be horrible you don’t shoot things down
At the fair ground - we shot arrows at the clown.
We threw balls at the coconuts
Hung ducks up by buy the neck
What wrong with shooting stars now? Oh what the heck…

What is wrong with you today?
I don’t much like the things you say
Well mum you tell me there’s a shooting star
What if he shoots us where we are?
I really don’t want to get shot 
I don’t care if he’s a star or not…

Come here my funny little son
The shooting star is not from a gun.
Every year meteors pass by, 
Way up in the earth’s night sky
Bits break off and fall to earth, 
They burn so bright…she smiles with mirth.

You’re telling me it’s not a man with a gun
But rocks that fall from near the sun?
I don’t care how bright they shine
What if they hit me from behind?

Don’t worry son they will not hit you 
They burn up fast, that’s what they do.

You tell me burning rocks drop from the sky
For heavens sake please tell me why.
It’s bad enough stars shooting now
But burning rocks, now holy cow!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Rice Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 6:24 PM
I like this I am 8 yrs old and i've got aspergers so things like this explain what I see. by the way what is soup mail??
Horsman Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 8:24 AM
so unique, is this, wonderful to read and so different.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 8:31 AM
Hi and thanks Harry xx
Gasun Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 5:58 AM
Wow! Wonderful poem, Mandy! You made me smile from the start of reading to the last. Can I also ask why we can I not tell the day tomorrow before a shooting a star drop? I did try it several times but I can not. LOL. Good luck, Mandy!
Pettit Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 9:40 PM
Borrow some astronomy books from the local library and have him peruse through them. It's a good chance they will do a better job at explaining meteors. Good write as usual Mandy.
Horne Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 2:11 PM
lol, love this witty write, Mandy. Will try to drop by the site this weekend : )
Kendrick Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 2:06 PM
Yes, children take things very concretely don't they..Enjoyed got a chuckle..Thanks for stopping by my blog twice..Yes, I was feeling down this morning..It was the atmospheric pressure I guess..I have days like that..Have a great eve..Sara
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August 11, 2012 at 12:18 PM
Hi Mandy, first this is a lovely write on every angle you look at it. 2nd refresh my mind, I have forgotten what you have asked me for. Sorry it's been a crazy long work-related summer. Hugs Michael
Guzzi Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 5:35 PM
lol SO real! Light & Love
Cohan Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 12:42 PM
burning rocks? in your Bible you hav a talking snake, a talking burning bush & a dude who can split the sea in half, superman can't even do that, so why not burning rocks...and whn this planet is proliferated by madmen and someone decides 2 release gases and bombs all that will be left is burning rocks-altho it hurts me physically to smile this perfect poem was a perfect cure for a man with little to smile about-may you swim with Neptune and dance with St. Michael - PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 1:20 PM
ha ha love this comment, so true but from a kids eye view burning rocks dropping from the sky is a scary prospect . stay cool xx
Williams Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 9:57 AM
Mandy very clever I like this, it is corhing here..yahooo...David
Song Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 6:36 AM
This is simply sensational and a great sense of story telling, Mandy...Great first read of the day...Don'tcha just love a child's imagination...Reminds me of God bowling with the angels as an explanation of thunder...enjoyed much! gwendolen
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