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Shooting Stars Be Careful How You Explain Them

~Shooting Stars~ Persied is back, he travels every year they say, Why does he come to us? I heard a little child say Persied is a shooting star…the mother simply said Well why don’t they shoot him then so that he is dead? Don’t be horrible you don’t shoot things down At the fair ground - we shot arrows at the clown. We threw balls at the coconuts Hung ducks up by buy the neck What wrong with shooting stars now? Oh what the heck… What is wrong with you today? I don’t much like the things you say Well mum you tell me there’s a shooting star What if he shoots us where we are? I really don’t want to get shot I don’t care if he’s a star or not… Come here my funny little son The shooting star is not from a gun. Every year meteors pass by, Way up in the earth’s night sky Bits break off and fall to earth, They burn so bright…she smiles with mirth. You’re telling me it’s not a man with a gun But rocks that fall from near the sun? I don’t care how bright they shine What if they hit me from behind? Don’t worry son they will not hit you They burn up fast, that’s what they do. You tell me burning rocks drop from the sky For heavens sake please tell me why. It’s bad enough stars shooting now But burning rocks, now holy cow!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/15/2012 6:24:00 PM
I like this I am 8 yrs old and i've got aspergers so things like this explain what I see. by the way what is soup mail??
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Date: 8/13/2012 8:24:00 AM
so unique, is this, wonderful to read and so different.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 8/13/2012 8:31:00 AM
Hi and thanks Harry xx
Date: 8/13/2012 5:58:00 AM
Wow! Wonderful poem, Mandy! You made me smile from the start of reading to the last. Can I also ask why we can I not tell the day tomorrow before a shooting a star drop? I did try it several times but I can not. LOL. Good luck, Mandy!
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Date: 8/12/2012 9:40:00 PM
Borrow some astronomy books from the local library and have him peruse through them. It's a good chance they will do a better job at explaining meteors. Good write as usual Mandy.
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Date: 8/11/2012 2:11:00 PM
lol, love this witty write, Mandy. Will try to drop by the site this weekend : )
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Date: 8/11/2012 2:06:00 PM
Yes, children take things very concretely don't they..Enjoyed got a chuckle..Thanks for stopping by my blog twice..Yes, I was feeling down this morning..It was the atmospheric pressure I guess..I have days like that..Have a great eve..Sara
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Date: 8/11/2012 12:18:00 PM
Hi Mandy, first this is a lovely write on every angle you look at it. 2nd refresh my mind, I have forgotten what you have asked me for. Sorry it's been a crazy long work-related summer. Hugs Michael
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Date: 8/10/2012 5:35:00 PM
lol SO real! Light & Love
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Date: 8/10/2012 12:42:00 PM
burning rocks? in your Bible you hav a talking snake, a talking burning bush & a dude who can split the sea in half, superman can't even do that, so why not burning rocks...and whn this planet is proliferated by madmen and someone decides 2 release gases and bombs all that will be left is burning rocks-altho it hurts me physically to smile this perfect poem was a perfect cure for a man with little to smile about-may you swim with Neptune and dance with St. Michael - PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 8/10/2012 1:20:00 PM
ha ha love this comment, so true but from a kids eye view burning rocks dropping from the sky is a scary prospect . stay cool xx
Date: 8/10/2012 9:57:00 AM
Mandy very clever I like this, it is corhing here..yahooo...David
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Date: 8/10/2012 6:36:00 AM
This is simply sensational and a great sense of story telling, Mandy...Great first read of the day...Don'tcha just love a child's imagination...Reminds me of God bowling with the angels as an explanation of thunder...enjoyed much! gwendolen
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