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Shivers

Ashes adrift in cold breezy whispers Mesmerized Monday finally seen So I sat here/there fingers achingly tapless over blurred keys. Wetly wondering in salted moving air... Clouds huddle together crowding for position- avoiding the ever sinking sun Welcoming darkness impatient in the wings.... Soon .....well soon enough words would dribble- dropping double entendres in croissant swirls. Darting and daring to form movements creating caresses to shiver- shudder tingle spine touches... tuning vibrating space in distant time timely distance springing to spark the awe of appreciation begging for light to guide them

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/16/2009 12:43:00 PM
Shimmering verbs, vibrating movements, dynamic imagery ... gosh, you are good.
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