Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- Shiver -

~ From hand to heart in rhythmic movements
                       ... happiness is trembling in the wind ~ 
                                              - quote by poet


                             The fertile ground of the life forces
                                raising his throne majestically
                          still absent under the down comforter
                                    In the process of creation
                                of freedom and life expression
                                        It is life in motion
                          under frozen ground covered with snow
                          Winter patiently allows itself to dissolve

                          Finally, the sun shines from the blue sky
                    The whole garden lights up with humble flowers
                           As white trembling stars on the ground
                                  springs first ballerina dances
                                  - challenges to being strong
                               displays divine art, just for you

                                                   ~

                                            09.04.2023
                                    Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                                  - 'S' Words, Poetry Contest -
                               Sponsored by: Constance La France
                                       1st place in the contest

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Nancy Kaufman April 23, 2023 at 1:41 PM This is definitely a fav for me, such wonderful imagery. Congratulations. Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:13 AM - Nancy, many thanks for the comment, fave and congratulations :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds April 13, 2023 at 7:01 PM Beautiful poetry Anne-Lise, it’s amazing how life is in motion even when the ground is frozen. Congratulations on your first place win in Constant’s contest. Hugs, Belle :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:12 AM - Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Belle :) - hugs

Joseph May April 13, 2023 at 8:31 AM Wonderful write and quote Anne, Congrats on your win Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2023 at 8:36 AM - Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris April 13, 2023 at 5:10 AM Congratulations on your top win in the Contest ... Sunshine. Nice poem. Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2023 at 8:35 AM - Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Alfonso :) - hugs

Valsa George April 12, 2023 at 8:40 PM Your poem has been as beautiful as the snowdrops. Back to your poem to Congratulate you on your first place win....dear Smile. Hugs and blessings ! Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2023 at 8:35 AM - Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler April 12, 2023 at 3:25 PM Ah snowdrops. Such a lovely spring sight, just as is your writing Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your win! :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2023 at 8:34 AM - Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Linda :) - hugs

Sotto Poet April 12, 2023 at 1:13 PM Back with Congratulations, Anne-Lise. Your great poem deserves amply the podium win. Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2023 at 8:34 AM - Many thanks for the congratulations, Las :) - hugs

Constance La France April 12, 2023 at 10:09 AM Sunshine, thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge, love your image, congratulations ! Anne-Lise Andresen April 12, 2023 at 10:36 AM - Many thanks for my place on the winner's list in your contest, Constance - A pleasure to participate :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith April 12, 2023 at 10:09 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/quote/picture. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away............. Anne-Lise Andresen April 12, 2023 at 10:37 AM - Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Paula :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes April 11, 2023 at 3:55 AM Ann-Lise this is truly beautiful. Anne-Lise Andresen April 11, 2023 at 5:45 AM - Thanks for the third comment on my poem, Wendy ... I really think you like this :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick April 11, 2023 at 3:33 AM Yes, these little jewels are so nice in early spring to remind us that all is not lost and winter is leaving. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara Anne-Lise Andresen April 11, 2023 at 6:59 AM - Snowdrops are spring's beautiful fairy tales, Sara :) - Thank you very much for your great comment :) - hugs

Fin Chuuk April 10, 2023 at 5:26 PM WOW! So gorgeous. Your poems are always beautiful just like your name Sunshine :) I love it! Anne-Lise Andresen April 11, 2023 at 6:57 AM - The name "Sunshine Smile" I got from a friend here at the P-soup many years ago, Fin :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues April 10, 2023 at 12:26 PM What we cannot yet see, we patiently wait for…foundation of Spring set in motion. Very nice, Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen April 11, 2023 at 6:54 AM - It's so beautiful when they come through the snow, Kim - Yes, we're waiting for spring but it's still cold - Many thanks for the kind comment :) - hugs

Sotto Poet April 10, 2023 at 11:37 AM Anne-Lise, you have a wonderful way with words, and your descriptions and analysis are spot on. Wishing you a had Nice Easter weekend, and blessings. Anne-Lise Andresen April 11, 2023 at 6:52 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Las :) - hugs

Gordon Mcconnell April 10, 2023 at 10:39 AM Good pen Anne-Lise with nice imagery and insightful line of thought.Hope you had Nice Easter weekend, blessings,Gordon Anne-Lise Andresen April 11, 2023 at 6:51 AM - It was a lovely Easter, Gordon ... hope yours was lovely too :) - Thank you very much for your great comment :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel April 10, 2023 at 4:37 AM Beautiful process of creation when winter's almost over described poetically, Sunshine, awesome:) Anne-Lise Andresen April 11, 2023 at 6:49 AM - We still have frost at night ... and it is not uncommon for more snow to come ... many thanks for the lovely comment, Jo :) - hugs

Jennifer Proxenos April 10, 2023 at 4:25 AM Hi there my dear sis, just as humans adapt to extreme hot and extreme cold temperatures, the same exactly applies to animal and plant life a perfect example you portray with your as always awesome pic, quite a thrill to imagine, how this plant has the strength and stamina to push its way up, through freezing snow. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Anne-Lise Andresen April 11, 2023 at 6:47 AM - Through snow and ice ... and brings spring to life ... nature is incredible, dear Jenny :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham April 10, 2023 at 4:02 AM Everything seems dead until the thaw comes and then new life appears, the wonders of nature. Best of luck in the contest Anne, hope you had a lovely Easter weekend. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen April 11, 2023 at 6:45 AM - Thank you very much, yes we had a lovely Easter ... I hope the same for you, Tom :) - hugs

Joseph P. DiMino April 10, 2023 at 3:41 AM Such a glorious poem about the process of creation, the dynamic churning at the life-core driving all manifest existence -- "The fertile ground of the life forces raising his throne majestically" -- Marvelous phrase! A FAV from me! Anne-Lise Andresen April 11, 2023 at 6:43 AM - Really appreciate your fave and lovely comment, thank you very much, Joe :) - hugs

Valsa George April 9, 2023 at 9:53 PM "As white trembling stars on the ground/ springs first ballerina dances". I visualize this lovely scene, made lucid by the beautiful image. Lovely poem and a great entry for the contest, Smile ! Blessings ! Anne-Lise Andresen April 10, 2023 at 3:05 AM - Snowdrops are an early sign of spring ... giving promise that spring will soon wake up ... many thanks for your comment, Valsa :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes April 9, 2023 at 8:32 PM Wow. Beautiful Ann-Lise. A real contender for a win in the contest, Good luck. Anne-Lise Andresen April 10, 2023 at 3:03 AM - Thanks again, Wendy :) - hugs

Stephan McBride April 9, 2023 at 12:49 PM Wow, this is an amazing picture and this poem brings it to life , love it Have a blessed Easter, hugs : ) Anne-Lise Andresen April 10, 2023 at 3:02 AM - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Stephan :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 9, 2023 at 12:07 PM The picture is a fine companion to this gorgeous poem, Anne-Lise. Thank you for sharing. :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 10, 2023 at 3:01 AM - Glad you liked my poem, thanks for your comment Evelyn :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar April 9, 2023 at 8:47 AM This is truly a life in motion. Well described, Anne-Lise Andresen April 10, 2023 at 3:00 AM - Thank you for your comment, Victor :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit April 9, 2023 at 7:56 AM Awesome poetry, Anne-Lise. Much enjoyed the images brought forth by your splendid pen with spring's arrival. Anne-Lise Andresen April 10, 2023 at 2:59 AM - I really appreciate your words, thank you very much Vijay :) - hugs

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