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Shining Passion

Ice gripped the branches, glimmering in the sun Crackling with what the wind has spun Hanging over the frozen snow covered land White spreads for miles from where I stand Winter’s cold takes hold with frozen breath in the air As the mind stops to think of thoughts left to spare Wandering through time, wondering just the same Old thoughts return, that I cannot tame Still they are there, shining passion I felt Until the sun returns and the ice does melt Heidi Sands 12/27/17

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Date: 12/27/2017 6:14:00 PM
The cold spell leaves many shivering...Nicely expressed Heidi...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/27/2017 7:59:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 12/27/2017 3:00:00 PM
Such captivating imagery and beautifully expressed in perfect rhyme, Heidi! I can tell that you and nature get along very well. Regards // paul
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Date: 12/27/2017 7:59:00 PM
Thank you Paul :)
Date: 12/27/2017 1:16:00 PM
Beautiful, Heidi. Thoughts of passion do linger . I can see them shining the same as the ice gripped branches! Happy Wednesday!!
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Date: 12/27/2017 1:39:00 PM
Thank you Mike! Happy Wednesday! :)
Date: 12/27/2017 1:00:00 PM
Gorgeous eloquence Heidi! Beautiful pen :) xomo!
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Date: 12/27/2017 1:39:00 PM
Thank you Maureen! I hope all is well :)
Date: 12/27/2017 11:59:00 AM
Heidi, you have penned a beautiful rhyme poem, so tranquil and lovely, well done !
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/27/2017 12:01:00 PM
Thank you Broken Wings. I appreciate your kindness :)
Date: 12/27/2017 11:03:00 AM
Written with special words--you always do so well depicting the interaction between nature and people..perfect rhymes..beautiful imagery..hopeful ending..well done Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/27/2017 11:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay :)
Date: 12/27/2017 10:56:00 AM
Can't wait for the sun to return... great introspective write Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/27/2017 11:06:00 AM
Thank you Tim :)

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