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I grow with both Love and lull. Days of outstretched ink. Festive age is the painless peace. Shines the hull only to savor the kid's sympathy. Let people know they have brightened my world from the time they are born before they grow up. 2nd place contest winner Written April 16, 2021 Writing Prompt - Shine - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France (Modified Fibonacci)

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Constance La France

Date: 4/22/2021 11:21:00 AM

Lasaad, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt Shine Challenge with your wonderful Modified Fibonacci poem, well done, and I really like your image quotes, love _ Constance

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/22/2021 3:14:00 PM

Thank you very much, Constance, I'm glad to win in your contests, and I hope I will never miss any of them..Cheers Lasaad

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/21/2021 11:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A magical write about your grandchildren and picture. Have a blessed day with your win..............

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/21/2021 10:58:00 AM

Wonderful, uniquely creative phrases, Lasaad. Our relationship with our children and grandchildren does "shine" in our lives. Congratulations on your win!

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/21/2021 9:45:00 AM

Hi Lasaad, I don't know how I missed this fantastic write. The relationship between grandparents and their grandchildren is priceless. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/17/2021 11:24:00 AM

Good one for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. With grandchildren I have found that there is a bond from early on until around 13-16 when their focus changes. I guess if a grandparent can go to ball games, dance recitals, music recitals, etc. then the time will continue on but usually the grandchild somewhat out grows the grandparent. I love all of mine but I know the time is limited. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/17/2021 11:39:00 AM

Thank you for viewing and taking the time to comment, Sara; good meeting you as well; I'm glad to get to know a talented and artistic poet. My very Best Regards to you.// Las

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/17/2021 10:11:00 AM

Marvelous, and so true! I wish you lots of luck in the contest. Have a great weekend, Lasaad.

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/17/2021 11:21:00 AM

Thanks for reading and commenting Milton, you’re so kind, best regards.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/16/2021 11:13:00 PM

Finally this contest is closed. I have little hope really. So be it.

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/17/2021 9:20:00 AM

Even a little hope it's always better than no hope; take care, my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/16/2021 4:08:00 PM

Beautiful and brilliant thanks for sharing Lasaad

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/16/2021 4:18:00 PM

Thanks for reading and commenting Mystic, you’re so sweet, best regards

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/16/2021 1:20:00 PM

Heya Lasaad, your poem is a truism, before they grow up, the magic is in their innocence, which in turn brings us so much joy, best wishes for the contest, cheers David

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/16/2021 4:05:00 PM

Thanks For reading and for the kind words David with my best regards