Shine On Me, Sunshine - Poetry Writing 1
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Shine on me, Sunshine
Pretty woman where do your secrets lie
Empty arms and stolen dreams
Your stares of cold pale blue
Lavender brazen fire moods
You walk into a room bold and without shame
With a smile on your face
Swing of your hips
A twist of the wrist
Phenomenal women you are
What secrets lie in the cobweb cavern tomb?
Your heart honeycomb of pain endured
No one can touch that beautifully cry
Your poems make me some what kind of discern and sigh
No one could mend and fill your worn out shoes
But you still
With a smile on your face
Swing of your hips
A twist of the wrist
Phenomenal women you are
By: Eve Roper 12/15/2015
A tribute to our wonderful girl Broken Wing
Free Verse
Free Verse is an irregular form of poetry in which the content free of traditional rules of versification, (freedom from fixed meter or rhyme).
In moving from line to line, the poet's main consideration is where to insert line breaks. Some ways of doing this include breaking the line where there is a natural pause or at a point of suspense for the reader.
I love the freedom Free Verse gives me. I wrote a poem on 11/1/2015 why I like Free Verse if anyone is interested in reading. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/free_verse_722977
For the contest, Poetry Writing #1, sponsor, Broken Wings
Copyright © Eve Roper | Year Posted 2015
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