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Shine on me, Sunshine

Pretty woman where do your secrets lie
Empty arms and stolen dreams
Your stares of cold pale blue
Lavender brazen fire moods

You walk into a room bold and without shame
     With a smile on your face
          Swing of your hips
               A twist of the wrist
                    Phenomenal women you are

What secrets lie in the cobweb cavern tomb?
Your heart honeycomb of pain endured
No one can touch that beautifully cry
Your poems make me some what kind of  discern and sigh
No one could mend and fill your worn out shoes

     But you still
          With a smile on your face
               Swing of your hips
                    A twist of the wrist
                         Phenomenal women you are

By: Eve Roper 12/15/2015

A tribute to our wonderful girl Broken Wing 

Free Verse

Free Verse is an irregular form of poetry in which the content free of traditional rules of versification, (freedom from fixed meter or rhyme).

In moving from line to line, the poet's main consideration is where to insert line breaks. Some ways of doing this include breaking the line where there is a natural pause or at a point of suspense for the reader.

I love the freedom Free Verse gives me. I wrote a poem on 11/1/2015 why I like Free Verse if anyone is interested in reading. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/free_verse_722977


For the contest, Poetry Writing #1, sponsor, Broken Wings

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Date: 12/20/2015 3:18:00 AM
Yes Eve the Sunshine is shining on you. It may be free verse but unless it is written with some sort of structure, like this write, it will not read well. Congrats and thank you for the visit to my site. May you have a blessed Christmas - GBY Ron
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Date: 12/19/2015 5:38:00 AM
Congratulations Eve for a well written form and tribute!!!
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Date: 12/18/2015 10:55:00 PM
Eve, congratulations and this is going in my favs, thanks so much for the tribute, it is lovely and I also like the freedom of free verse ~
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Date: 12/18/2015 10:21:00 PM
Wow great take with this lovely form Eve.. I too love this form.. Congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/18/2015 9:31:00 PM
Hi Eve, Congratulations on your sweet win Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 12/18/2015 9:16:00 PM
Eve, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN.... LINDA
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Date: 12/18/2015 4:17:00 PM
big congrats, Eve. I knew this was a winner!!
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Date: 12/18/2015 3:06:00 PM
Congrats lady Eve!! You deserved it...*smiles*
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Date: 12/18/2015 2:17:00 PM
WOW! this is stunning Eve congrats on your win I am sure Broken Wings will have loved this:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/18/2015 3:33:00 AM
A beautiful write, Eve. A phenomenal woman she is, as you are too. T.J
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Date: 12/16/2015 6:26:00 PM
Eve, this seems to be one about our dear Constance. Can't wait till she sees the picture and comments to this lovely poem.
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Date: 12/16/2015 6:46:00 PM
Yes it is,Andrea, I saw the contest saw the photo of her and she did say anything so I went for it. She is such a sweet heart.
Date: 12/16/2015 10:11:00 AM
the process is sometimes stressed....sometimes with thick smoke and tainted coke....but white lines cant inspire my rhymes....now switch on the cd and let my heart bleed me....very inspiring worn out shoes eve....lol....;)
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Date: 12/16/2015 10:22:00 AM
I wouldn't change your poem's your rhyming is just wonderful it gives it a flare of dance just like Elvis charmed the girls