Shine On Harvest Moon

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SHINE ON HARVEST MOON September's moon wanes to dimness October's moon rises brazenly Casting a shimmer over the dark night Shadows are dispelled, night animals creep away October's moon rises brazenly The harvest is ripe for the gathering Shadows are dispelled, night animals creep away The fields await the harvest to begin The harvest is ripe for the gathering Casting a shimmer over the dark night The fields await the harvest to begin September's moon wanes to dimness Date Written - 16 October 2019 - Pantoum form Na'd November 7, 2019 Writing Challenge December Sponsor - Wiishkobi Ode - Dear Heart

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/2/2020 12:50:00 PM

Spectacular imagery in your poem, Curtis.

Constance La France

Date: 12/10/2019 7:22:00 PM

Curtis congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem, well done!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/24/2019 1:30:00 PM

Yet another powerful poem from the pen of Curtis Moorman. Potent pantoum penned poetically! Warm wishes, my friend. ~ Gershon

Curtis Moorman
Date: 10/24/2019 2:22:00 PM

Thank you, my dear friend, for these encouraging words. A difficult form of poetry to tackle, but I tried it on for size. Let's hope it fits! lol I hope others who read it will feel the same as you.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/17/2019 12:40:00 AM

Loved your pantoum Curtis, I struggle with this form. Hope you're well. Tom

Curtis Moorman
Date: 10/17/2019 7:24:00 AM

Thanks, Tom -- for your friendship, encouragement, and concern for my well being. You have been in my corner for a very long time, and I appreciate your invaluable support.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 10/16/2019 6:15:00 PM

Very well written, I enjoyed it!

Curtis Moorman
Date: 10/16/2019 6:46:00 PM

Thanks, Timothy! I can always count on you for support and encouragement.

Wendy Watson

Date: 10/16/2019 4:31:00 PM

I loved the contrast of the weak and strong months in the first two lines and the harvest images, Curtis. The poem reads really well.

Curtis Moorman
Date: 10/16/2019 6:46:00 PM

Thanks, Wendy! I will take a look at the email. I appreciate your support and kind comments.