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I know the pain in the words you speak I know what it feels like to be weak I can’t take away your pain, but please hear me… I am here, if you just need to know and to see --- That you are truly not alone --- Where the storms pass, the sun has also shone As it will shine again upon your gentle soul You may feel the warmth on your next stroll --- Blessed are those who can be true --- --- The light will continue to shine on you --- Heidi Sands 7/22/17

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Alfred Berggren

Date: 7/22/2017 8:50:00 AM

Such a wonderful promise and beautiful picture. There is much compassion in your poem.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/22/2017 9:13:00 AM

Thank you Alfred :)

Mike Hauser

Date: 7/22/2017 8:22:00 AM

Another that shines the beauty of your heart!

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/22/2017 8:23:00 AM

That is a nice thing to say Mike. Thank you :)

Tim Smith

Date: 7/22/2017 8:05:00 AM

All we can do is be there for them.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/22/2017 8:06:00 AM

You are right Tim : Thank you :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/22/2017 7:53:00 AM

Hello Heidi, This is really a beautiful and an evocative rhyme which brings numerous images definitely to one's mind. You're last two verses pull it all together. Very Well-Done!! A FAVE!! Best Wishes, Gary

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/22/2017 7:54:00 AM

Hi Gary. I appreciate your feedback on this . Thank you. Have a nice day today :)