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To love with a smile is real skill, that in you I do most admire, I see devotion your face fill, and your eyes shine with love’s fire! warmth of love is like furnace lit, that hums and glows to cheer the heart, glow that comes from you I admit, shines bright from your heart’s sweetest part! your love does shine without embers, much said without a spoken word, like an ink less pen writing verse, from a stringless chord music heard! gentle touch, a few words of love, conveys all that our heart desires, to love with a smile is real skill, that in you I do most admire!
6th place win Written 15/04/2021 Shine poetry competition Constance La France sponsored 8 lines each line 4 quatrains with alternate line rhyme

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Date: 4/22/2021 4:19:00 PM
Krish, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt Shine Challenge with this Rhyme poem, well done, love _Constance
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/22/2021 10:34:00 PM
Thanks Constance! Pleased it had a placement. Kind regards
Date: 4/21/2021 5:10:00 PM
Lovely, touching poem, Krish - every word comes from your heart. Congratulations on the win. Warm wishes, always ~ Mala
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/21/2021 5:50:00 PM
Thanks Mala! I value such feedback more than the win! So pleased you liked it and think of it well!:)
Date: 4/21/2021 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your pen was writing overtime on this one. "Wonderful" Have a blessed day................
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/21/2021 1:14:00 PM
Thanks Paula! Pleased you like it!
Date: 4/21/2021 11:18:00 AM
Wonderful images Krish - "inkless pen," "stringless chord," "shine without embers." This poem does shine with uniquely penned phrases and wise lines. Congratulations on your win!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/4/2021 8:35:00 PM
Thanks Sam!:)
Date: 4/15/2021 9:04:00 PM
Lovely poem, Krish ~
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/16/2021 5:29:00 AM
Thanks Line. Pleased you like it.
Date: 4/15/2021 6:33:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/16/2021 5:30:00 AM
Thanks Seeker.:)

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