Shhh

A school librarian demanding quiet Has her loud kids on a rum cake diet With the wild ones sedated She's at peace and elated Now all teachers are eager to try it. 7/23/22

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/29/2022 1:20:00 PM

Great Limerick, Robert. I enjoyed the read. Bill

Robert Gorelick
Date: 8/13/2022 12:27:00 PM

Have a slice of rum cake on me. Thanks Bill. Robert

Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/26/2022 2:49:00 PM

Hi Robert, that seems to be the way to do it. I'll join the class. Love the creative limerick Thank you for the laugh. ..... Mike.

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/27/2022 5:15:00 PM

The librarian's punishment is long overdue! Any other teacher should shelf the idea. Robert

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/25/2022 7:57:00 PM

Ha, ha! Sounds like a plan, Robert! Count me in! :) Mr. Teacher

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/27/2022 5:16:00 PM

Always happy hour in the library! Robert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2022 1:16:00 PM

so cute. Better than a sedative pill, huh?

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/25/2022 2:48:00 PM

Works for me! Robert

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 7/25/2022 10:22:00 AM

That's pretty clever.. Well penned

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/25/2022 2:49:00 PM

Thank you, Paghunda. It's always nice to hear from a kiwi, cheers! Robert

Valsa George

Date: 7/24/2022 9:25:00 PM

The school librarian is quite clever. She must have soaked the cake in rum ! Teachers, better not try this technique.... :) :)

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/25/2022 2:42:00 PM

The librarian's punishment is long overdue! Any other teacher should shelf the idea. Robert

Michael Tor

Date: 7/24/2022 8:00:00 PM

I made a Baba ( French Rum Cake) for French class and soaked it in Rum the students and teacher loved it. This reminds me of that day. lol. Wonderful write Robert..

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/25/2022 2:41:00 PM

I appreciate your generous comments and intend on reading more of your though provoking work! Robert

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/24/2022 5:46:00 PM

I'll bet they are. That's very clever of the school librarian. I think of many pranks we played on Ms. Greiner. The worst was rubbing garlic all over her desk. It about drove her insane. Of course, we knew nothing and the stench didn't bother us.

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/25/2022 2:39:00 PM

Yes, my interest peaked, I am waiting with bated breath!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/25/2022 10:30:00 AM

Sometime I'll write about the time Dolly (Ms Greiner) took me to the principal's office. She turned right to go into his office and I kept going straight...out to the school bus and went home. Worried all weekend about what would happen Monday morning. Interest peaked????

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/24/2022 7:13:00 PM

Ms. Greiner just called me she wants you to meet her in the principal's office! Be there!

R J. Elless

Date: 7/24/2022 3:53:00 PM

Robert, that is slick. Very cute. Stay Creative Howard.

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/24/2022 4:32:00 PM

Stay creative and true to yourself! Robert

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/24/2022 1:38:00 PM

I can see how the librarian's method may be tempting, her methods take the cake! Love it Robert. Your limericks are always fun and breezy...more prithee please! ~Anaya

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/24/2022 4:33:00 PM

Thank you for your support and wonderful comments! Robert