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She's Late, She's Late For a Very Important Date

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Drat! My yoga teacher is late again I can’t hold on much longer... please send help! Image 3 chosen Make It Five Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May Checked with how many syllables 9/21/19

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/29/2019 2:38:00 PM

This is lovely and cute, and it brings about an effortless natural smile :) Congratulations on your win, Jan. Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2019 2:28:00 PM

I thought yours was the funnest poem of all. Congrats, jan.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2019 2:30:00 AM

- Congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/26/2019 9:50:00 PM

Hahaha! Great win! Congrats!;)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2019 2:07:00 AM

Thanks Brenda:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 9/26/2019 7:54:00 PM

Love the humor in your poem Jan...Congrats on your win

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2019 2:07:00 AM

Thanks for the picture prompt I loved the picture!:-) hugs Jan xx

Juliet Ligon

Date: 9/23/2019 4:52:00 PM

Lol, interested portrayal of the above picture.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2019 2:07:00 AM

Thanks Juliet:-) hugs Jan xx

Wendy Watson

Date: 9/23/2019 1:58:00 PM

Such a humorous take on this picture prompt ,Jan. It really tickled me!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2019 2:06:00 AM

I wrote another one but thought it too cheeky for the contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/22/2019 8:03:00 PM

How cute this is Jan! I haven't seen this contest yet. I shall have to look it up. I love your poem and the picture! : ) xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2019 2:06:00 AM

thanks Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/22/2019 4:57:00 PM

Can be taken in a couple of ways! Enjoyed, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2019 5:30:00 PM

ha ha ha :-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Smith

Date: 9/22/2019 10:09:00 AM

Lol, so funny Jan. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2019 2:10:00 PM

Thanks Gary:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/22/2019 9:55:00 AM

Ha ha, she would have split her yoga pants with that position.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2019 2:09:00 PM

lol Rick:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/22/2019 7:06:00 AM

- Funny description with your humor, Jan ... a winning poem .. for sure ... love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2019 2:09:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise it was such a fun pic I had to write about it:-) hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/22/2019 6:11:00 AM

This is perfect. I love it. You always inspire... Bless you always

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2019 6:29:00 AM

aww thanks, the picture was such fun!:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/21/2019 9:30:00 PM

I dread to think what will happen if those flowers spring back, ouch. Good luck. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2019 2:15:00 AM

Thanks Tom, hope Turkey is sunny, I woke up to rain this morning:-) enjoy your hols xxx:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2019 7:14:00 PM

awesomely done, Jan. This form is SO difficult because it's so hard to narrow down one's thoughts and yet you cleverly managed it.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2019 7:32:00 PM

Thanks Andrea i have written another one but its probably not suitable for the contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/21/2019 5:07:00 PM

in addition to words, you certainly have a knack for finding the right photo! Well done! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2019 6:44:00 PM

Thanks Rico but credit has to go to Joseph as the picture was one of his contest prompts:-) hugs jan xx

Ann Gilmour

Date: 9/21/2019 12:42:00 PM

haha. that is great Jan, made me laugh out loud - what a position to get into, haha. Good luck for the contest Jan. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2019 6:43:00 PM

thanks Ann:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/21/2019 12:38:00 PM

Ha ha, very cute and fun Jan, good luck in the contest! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2019 6:40:00 PM

Thanks Tania:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/21/2019 12:35:00 PM

lol this picture works wonderfully with your words...lovely penning my friend :) hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2019 6:40:00 PM

Joseph had the picture as one of his contest prompts and Icouldn;t resist writing about it:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/21/2019 11:38:00 AM

Lol! Jan, Your words worked well with the photo perfectly. It is so hilarious! It should do well in the contest. I wish you the best of luck in contest.Have a great day:-)Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2019 6:21:00 PM

Thanks Alexis i rarely write this form and it was fun:-) hugs jan xx

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/21/2019 11:36:00 AM

I like this...Look at squirrel's face...

Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2019 6:20:00 PM

I had to write for the contest the picture is so cute:-) hugs jan xx