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She's Late, She's Late For a Very Important Date

Drat! My yoga teacher is late again
I can’t hold on
much longer...
please send
help!

Image 3 chosen

Make It Five Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Joseph May

Checked with how many syllables

9/21/19

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Paul Callus Date: 9/29/2019 2:38:00 PM This is lovely and cute, and it brings about an effortless natural smile :) Congratulations on your win, Jan. Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/29/2019 2:28:00 PM I thought yours was the funnest poem of all. Congrats, jan. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/27/2019 2:30:00 AM - Congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Brenda Chiri Date: 9/26/2019 9:50:00 PM Hahaha! Great win! Congrats!;) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/27/2019 2:07:00 AM Thanks Brenda:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May Date: 9/26/2019 7:54:00 PM Love the humor in your poem Jan...Congrats on your win Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/27/2019 2:07:00 AM Thanks for the picture prompt I loved the picture!:-) hugs Jan xx

Juliet Ligon Date: 9/23/2019 4:52:00 PM Lol, interested portrayal of the above picture. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/27/2019 2:07:00 AM Thanks Juliet:-) hugs Jan xx

Wendy Watson Date: 9/23/2019 1:58:00 PM Such a humorous take on this picture prompt ,Jan. It really tickled me! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/27/2019 2:06:00 AM I wrote another one but thought it too cheeky for the contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/22/2019 8:03:00 PM How cute this is Jan! I haven't seen this contest yet. I shall have to look it up. I love your poem and the picture! : ) xxoo Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/27/2019 2:06:00 AM thanks Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/22/2019 4:57:00 PM Can be taken in a couple of ways! Enjoyed, Jan! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/22/2019 5:30:00 PM ha ha ha :-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Smith Date: 9/22/2019 10:09:00 AM Lol, so funny Jan. :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/22/2019 2:10:00 PM Thanks Gary:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/22/2019 9:55:00 AM Ha ha, she would have split her yoga pants with that position. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/22/2019 2:09:00 PM lol Rick:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/22/2019 7:06:00 AM - Funny description with your humor, Jan ... a winning poem .. for sure ... love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/22/2019 2:09:00 PM Thanks Anne-Lise it was such a fun pic I had to write about it:-) hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh Date: 9/22/2019 6:11:00 AM This is perfect. I love it. You always inspire... Bless you always Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/22/2019 6:29:00 AM aww thanks, the picture was such fun!:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/21/2019 9:30:00 PM I dread to think what will happen if those flowers spring back, ouch. Good luck. Tom Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/22/2019 2:15:00 AM Thanks Tom, hope Turkey is sunny, I woke up to rain this morning:-) enjoy your hols xxx:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/21/2019 7:14:00 PM awesomely done, Jan. This form is SO difficult because it's so hard to narrow down one's thoughts and yet you cleverly managed it. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/21/2019 7:32:00 PM Thanks Andrea i have written another one but its probably not suitable for the contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta Date: 9/21/2019 5:07:00 PM in addition to words, you certainly have a knack for finding the right photo! Well done! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/21/2019 6:44:00 PM Thanks Rico but credit has to go to Joseph as the picture was one of his contest prompts:-) hugs jan xx

Ann Gilmour Date: 9/21/2019 12:42:00 PM haha. that is great Jan, made me laugh out loud - what a position to get into, haha. Good luck for the contest Jan. With kindest thoughts Ann xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/21/2019 6:43:00 PM thanks Ann:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin Date: 9/21/2019 12:38:00 PM Ha ha, very cute and fun Jan, good luck in the contest! :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/21/2019 6:40:00 PM Thanks Tania:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Adams Date: 9/21/2019 12:35:00 PM lol this picture works wonderfully with your words...lovely penning my friend :) hugs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/21/2019 6:40:00 PM Joseph had the picture as one of his contest prompts and Icouldn;t resist writing about it:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 9/21/2019 11:38:00 AM Lol! Jan, Your words worked well with the photo perfectly. It is so hilarious! It should do well in the contest. I wish you the best of luck in contest.Have a great day:-)Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/21/2019 6:21:00 PM Thanks Alexis i rarely write this form and it was fun:-) hugs jan xx

Arturo Michael Date: 9/21/2019 11:36:00 AM I like this...Look at squirrel's face... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/21/2019 6:20:00 PM I had to write for the contest the picture is so cute:-) hugs jan xx