She Who Savored Seasons

I picture Phyllis – soft and lovely face,
a smile dimpled sweet and luminous;
her fuchsia lips drop syllable in lace.
She carries grace, for God was generous.
In matter of the heart, a lucky one -
revered was she by two who loved her true.
Each one, a moon, they yielded to her sun
and cherished her until their days were through.
The first beloved she bid adieu late spring.
Though cancer stole his life, he’d left his seed.
She wed a second love, which eased death’s sting.
From summer on, sweet joy would then proceed.
Her sons are grown, her late adored – a ghost.
But she has savored seasons more than most.

*This was inspired by a church woman whose boys
 I babysat in my youth. She remained a stunning 
beauty even into her old age.

May 22, 2023
For Sotto Poet's Sonnet Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Daniel Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 12:41 AM
Lovely poem on a beautiful woman, inside and out, I'm sure, congratulations on your win, Andrea:)
Kauffman Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 11:48 AM
Andrea, this loving tribute is so gentle and wonderfully written. Congratulations on your first place win. Indeed there are many women around us who illustrate true beauty and grace with their lives! Amazing women. Blessings!
Poet Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 10:49 AM
This piece is truly remarkable and commands great power. I extend my warmest congratulations for your well-deserved Win.
Kendrick Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 5:18 AM
Great that you have honored her in this work. It is wonderful to see some women or men who carry on a beautiful or handsome presence even in old age. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara
Peck Avatar
May 23, 2023 at 9:39 AM
It's a beautiful poem, Andrea. I love "her fushia lips drop syllable in lace." And the title is wonderful, too!
Oldham Avatar
May 23, 2023 at 5:06 AM
A beautiful tribute, Andrea! I have known such myself. Always to be admired. Well done! Best, John
Buhagiar Avatar
May 23, 2023 at 1:07 AM
Lovely poem and a great tribute to a person who deserves praise. Won't find many of them these days.
Tor Avatar
May 22, 2023 at 10:34 PM
Such a lovely women Andrea, love the theme and creativity of words you chose for her...
Lawless Avatar
May 22, 2023 at 5:59 PM
Love it!!! The title right through to the final line.....beautifully done Andrea
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