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She Weeps For Summer

In autumn's brisk crimson
she weeps for summer.
September courts her
with scarlet and fire,
but xanthic plains
and sun's saffron blush
on cobalt lakes
stain her cheeks.
She'll sleep
in winter's bereft cloister,
the lambent trickle
of peach orchards
seeping into her dreams,
memories embossed
on a gold-stained pillow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roth Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 11:34 AM
I enjoyed this poem.
Coulstock Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 8:35 AM
You are definitely a poet my friend.Classy and beautiful.
Cozart Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 9:03 AM
Thank you, Sylvia.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 12:03 AM
This is another one for you Dale. Not surprised as your poetry always pleases. Congratulations on your win my friend! : )
Cozart Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:38 AM
Thanks, Connie. Good to hear from you.
Gauthier Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 8:33 AM
Wow, awesome imagery, Dale. Congrats on your most deserving win.
George   Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 6:01 AM
Very beautiful...both the painting and the poem. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Elaine
Cozart Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 7:48 AM
Thank you, Elaine.
Krampe Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 5:47 AM
Lovely imagery, Dale - I especially loved winter's bereft cloisters. Congrats on your win!
Cozart Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 7:48 AM
Thanks so much, Agnes.
Gondolf Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 5:14 PM
This is so good, Dale, it leaves a rainbow of colors flashing through my mind. John
Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 5:20 PM
LOVE this. I love all you do. FAVE
Cozart Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 5:26 PM
Aw. Thanks so much, Andrea.
Wanter Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 4:47 PM
Enjoyed this very, very much.
Cozart Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 5:26 PM
Thanks, Sunlite.
Pandit Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Awesome, colorful..a pleasure to read, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 3:36 PM
Thanks very much, Vijay.
Gauthier Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 2:59 PM
So sensuous - bravo, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Thank you, Line.
Allison Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 2:54 PM
Dale keep on writing the free verse it is stunning - your trademark use of colour is so so special. think this would do well in one of Brian's contests:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Thanks so much, Jan.
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