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She Was Like Music

She was like music And I longed to dance When we met At beach·y dive bar My body was the beat Ready to shake I begged for the chance At beach·y dive bar Her words were the vocals I was put in a trance We sang to each other At beach·y dive bar Swaying, so gently to the sounds Swirling up inside me Her smile was the melody At beach·y dive bar I'm bitten like the last stanza Of a poem unwritten I fell in love at first glance At beach·y dive bar

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Date: 3/16/2018 12:12:00 AM
The continuity of this poem was wonderful. A well-written poem indeed, Daniel. Makes me want to go to that bar!
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Daniel Miltz
Date: 3/16/2018 9:57:00 AM
I met my wife there 30 years ago.
Date: 3/15/2018 8:13:00 PM
A lovely write, Daniel!
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Daniel Miltz
Date: 3/15/2018 8:33:00 PM
thank you, kim!
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Daniel Miltz
Date: 3/15/2018 8:33:00 PM
thank you, kim!

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